Verse 1]
Light the camel watch it burn, ash the ashes from the cherry/
I'm tryin to not to care, but all these cares i try to carry/
Bury me, i'm gettin deeper, escapin is less likely/
My whole heart is ripped apart just cuz somebody liked me/
Strike me dead, dear lord, right here on earth while i'm kneelin/
Heaven's gotta heal me cuz this world ain't shit at healin/
And I'm feelin kinda shitty, pray for answers to the questions/
But I fear nobody hears me, and my faith just starts to lession/
I'm stressin to the point where the stress just overtakes me/
Shakes me, breaks me, makes me mad I gotta break free/
Rip the chains, hack the shackles, tackle, snip the veins/
Dismiss my pain, refrain from lettin it get too strange/
Its an insane world, and only the crazy are the sane/
I'm playin the game, but some start sayin my name/
I'm gettin in too deep, i'm makin it way too hard/
I need a little space, to place and play my cards/
I look to your eyes, cuz i know no other strength/
I've never met a girl who would go no further lengths/
I never had a friend who was down to play them pranks/
So girl, a second chance is my way of sayin "Thanks"/
[Chorus]
Girl, you could hit me, hurt me, make me feel good/
We could fight like petty people, or make it real good/
I could love you till the end, or I could prance/
Its up to you, you got my heart, //one last chance/
[Repeat]

[Verse 2]
Through the dark of night, my dreams are filled witcha' beauty/
Mental pictures of this cutie, wish you could see what u do to me/
See, if the sun may bring rain, a rainbow rises and towers/
But only if you're strong enough to wait through the showers/
If you can't stand the rain, then you'll quit quick/
But if you hang on strong, true beauty you'll witness/
Through sickness, through health, through place and time/
I promise if you let me then I'll make you mine/
I promise if you're cryin I'll have the hand that you hold/
Just like when we're drivin, and I'll keep you from cold/
If you fall for me, I promise to catch you/
You wanna be with your friends, girl, I promise I let you/
I promise to hold your heart, if you promise to trust me/
And I promise not to shave when i know you like it scruffy/
I promise to treat you like a queen, quench every thirst/
Satisfy your needs, and always put you first/
I promise never to break any promise I make/
I promise on the real that I'll never be fake/
I promise to strike, ignite, and then light up your life/
If you promise to be my only fan when I fight/

[Chorus]
Girl, you could hit me, hurt me, make me feel good/
We could fight like petty people, or make it real good/
I could love you till the end, or I could prance/
Its up to you, you got my heart, //one last chance/
[Repeat]

Don't say a word, just listen, close your eyes so you can see me/
Shut your mind off, listen to your heart/
I'm feelin like i'm fallin, and i'm fallin all to easy/
Give it time, and we'll never grow apart/
When I'm away and I miss you and I'm cravin your face/
I'd throw away every other flavor if u gave me a taste/
Your soft lips, hips/ on my back and i'm topless/
Scratchin on my cross'n lean in for a soft kiss/
Eyes closed/ Cuz if its a dream i'll keep sleepin/
YOu make me so strong, but still u make my knees weaken/
And I'm keepin every picture, so I can't forget the times/
You woke me from the couch, damn near actin like a crime/
We're not perfect people, but this feels so perfect/
With you i'm priceless, but without you i'm worthless/
I curse shit and get mad, hit walls in bursts of anger/
But I'll always keep you safe, and protect you from danger/
make a love that can't compare and show it off to the world/
And if the world doesn't like, then I'll fight for this girl/

[Chorus]
Girl, you could hit me, hurt me, make me feel good/
We could fight like petty people, or make it real good/
I could love you till the end, or I could prance/
Its up to you, you got my heart, //one last chance/


tell me what u think ... get to see the softer side of the g

so no one is gonna give me an honest opinion about this shit or what

----touching story
yes i was touched

it was a good drop, it does hit the heart and shit, in a way that this was a good song, and presents a good chance.
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Only God can judge me, Who THE FUCK IS YOU?!

emotional....a bit to emotional. Dawg dont get down over a girl. I mean ya there great and all but there nothing to fret ova. great drop

thanks for the vote dogg still uppin this shit .................................................. ....... .................................................. .............................................

and once again im retarded dont mind what i said ............... i just want to hear more opinions esp from the females.......... as to what they would think holla

Yo feelin tha drop dawg,i know where u comin from and am fellin tha shit,need a collabo jus holla.

Peace

thanx for the positive feedback .......... im gonna be busy for a few weeks so i dnt got time to spend on collabo but hit me up if u wanna do something when i have time to concentrate on it .. ill be down .......... if u guys would hit up my battles too people be sleepin

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females i need to know what u think about this............ please let me know your opinion and what i need to change...

dat was good shit man im feelin dat............................................... .................................................. ......keep it goin

taht was really touching really...altough getting caught up in girls is something ive never thought men did....you dont imagine it..well n e of the guys ive went out with n e ways lol....but serisouly try to pick yourself up ad move on....if yous arent together.wasnt meant to be...ill drop

ite i have been moving on i just want to keep it on good terms u know and that was on my mind so a wrote just wanted some advice on it thats all