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05-18-03, 02:59 AM | #1 | ||||||
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B.r.e Presnets (a Dedication To 2pac)
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yo peep this drop by me,Tamaira,an emotional drop,yeah i hope ya feed off this piece,dedicated to 2Pac Shakur,,,,,,,,,,,B.R.E........... on September 13th,a great man died on that day ,the whole world cried some say that he's gone, the ex-con but in mah heart,the legend live on (repeat) verse 1: i can't believe what's going on in my eyes/ my black brothas are fallin apart in one blink of an eye/ sometimes i wonder why/ takin time shit down and remenising while i cry/ we can't forget about 2Pac Shakur/ cause he's tha tru ghetto warrior/ that's why we all gotta keep our heads up/ and never give up/ we need less killin,less hatin and more luvin/ while da lord jesus christ praise me wit his blessins/ you truly was tha original gangsta/ rest in peace 2Pac we luv ya/ man all tha tight memories that i'll never forget/ i know every emcee wants to follow ur footsteps/ tha informing of your death hit me like a knife to my chest/ i know you're watchin down on us while we're reppin you to da fullest/ September 13th was tha darkest day/ and it was tha day that you passed away/ it was also tha day this rap game changed in every way/ i know that you're alive in every one's heart today/ cause your beautiful spirit is here to stay/ you truly was tha original gangsta/ rest in peace 2Pac we luv ya/ (chorus) on September 13th,a great man died on that day,the whole world cried some say that he's gone,the ex-con but in mah heart,the legend lives on (repeat)
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05-18-03, 03:29 AM | #2 | ||||||
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I THINK YOUR SHIT IS HOT
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05-18-03, 03:30 AM | #3 | ||||||
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YO BUT COULD YOU GO CHECK OUT MY BATTLE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9890#post439890 |
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05-18-03, 04:22 AM | #4 | |||||||
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vocab coulda been upped, subject was aight, but it started off talkin about how the black men r dropin like flys or some shit, then you got on topic,
ima give this a 6-7 out of 10 |
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05-18-03, 05:37 AM | #5 | ||||||
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Yea, this was AITE could have been better and to PAC R.I.P
stay up playaz |
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05-18-03, 10:15 AM | #6 | |||||||
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This was tight
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06-17-03, 04:00 AM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: C1DA C961
nice drop needs mo vocab doe but it's hard
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06-17-03, 07:43 AM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: FD20 0C9B
up da vocab n stuff but otherwise good topicz and real stuff
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06-17-03, 08:22 AM | #9 | |||||||
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yeah need s a bit better vocab.................
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06-17-03, 12:34 PM | #10 | ||||
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yeah i agree with all before
it was a good topic and shit but yo another thing, change the paragraph format to show the bars cuz it makes it difficult to read how it is uppin for fam
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06-17-03, 03:09 PM | #11 | ||||||
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I think the subject was great. I feel that lyrically, it could have been better. PS, I don't know of any album so far that can top All Eyes On Me. Just my opinion though.
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