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Whats with all the bull shit we call life today
IP: 09B1 3966
(THE-EGG-MAN)
ever notice'd that shit allways happens and the worst time/ faggots go round saying that it wont happen to them there'll be doing just fine/ spend your whole life trying for one thing/ just to stop, think, realise that you cant sing/ spend you whole life working for one gole/ have it snatched, taken, then left feeling that you have no sole/ when it comes around and they alow you to be admitted/ get locked up for some shit you never comitted/ what the hells the deal with the world today/ have faggot ass pussy's doing things the wrong way. |
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IP: 6592 2BD0
an improvement from the last one, (spell GOAL right!), you had some concept and meaning to this one, your vocab certainly improved...for a newbie piece i'd give dis about 5/10,
keep droppin them, the more shit you do, the better you'll get! |
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