im quick draw mcgraw when it comes to rhymin//
blast kats fast with the 6 shoota,then keep on ridin//
lock aim at wack kats where ima stay firin//
never caterin to your favorites it gotta be rough//
never easy to beat me when im completely submerged//
within my verses,exerptin verses to hurt kids//
i leave you hurt-in ass off in the dirt bitch//
im dangerous when on the mic brains get bust//
B Newz be my name to thugs,cuz when i come thru its bad news//
i smash crews,bust raps like glocks,they pass through//
vest or no vest,i destroy kids,when i lay my spits//
i spray my spits,better yet i straight up penetrate you kids//
what?

this mos def will be finished finalized and recorded. guaranteed. -

not bad, fierce rhymer, bar structure needs a lil work though

naw structure is str8 trust me. im versitile when spittin itll work. but good looks kid. up^

this was ok, kind of basic though.

you said your recording it into a song? wheres the rest?

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man u must not of read this. if u didnt see i said i was gonna finish it.

up^

This shit was aight

up motha suckaz!

Nice Man,Real Nice.. Seems Ive Found Sum1 Dat Can Write a Gangsta Track Almost as Good Az Me...

pZ... $pitzophrenic

this wasnt gangsta but ok? lol.

this was type ill, it still needs work, but hell, it was still hott

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the tone in this was agressive and in this case it worked sorta like M.O.P stylee ya nah i mean? it flowed well and ya rhyme structure was aight but i think you need to throw in a few multies. finish it off properly and then check it more in depth aight peace

no doubt. no fuckin doubt. uppin.

it was alrite.....next time keep off the gangsta shit