iight im not a whack emcee but im not tha best, i wanna be tha best tho, and my shit aint cutting it, could anybody help me elevate so i can get closer or mabey even reach my goal?


imma post some links up just tell me what i need to work on, to unleash my true potential

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60783
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60204
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=59636
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60024
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55954
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55954
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55648


check them out an tell me what i need to work on, constructive criticizim is needed.

uppin this waitin on some help,

come on i need to know,

read each one of these,,,,I promise you that your next battle will be much better....and then when you look back....you won't be able to stand your battles.If You Want To Learn How To Battle.....Click This Link And Read

The problem with your verses is your punches for the most part.You need to start to use personals and wordplay.And work on multies....If you want to see some illmatic battles...pm me ...everybody here is lacking in text....If you click tha link and read everything and master it,you could easily merk the text cats here....

iight thanx

yea tell me if they worked fo u dawg

they helped me