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06-29-03, 07:07 PM | #1 | |||||||
Jee-You Knit?
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UNDERATED~OVERHATED (0-0) vs. The MRB (0-0)
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Verses are due THURSDAY Voting End's SATURDAY You must vote on 5 battles, and drop your links in the Voting Thread Topic... eye of the tiger
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-An Original RB Member: Yes, We're That Much Better- Throw Back .Compton Records. .Vicious Determination. "There are times when silence has the loudest voice" - Mike Bibby The First Ever Middle Weight Champion |
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06-30-03, 05:03 AM | #2 | |||||||
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k im checked in, dodgy topic, should be interesting tho............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......
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06-30-03, 05:26 AM | #3 | |||||||
$LET ME CASH DA BLUNT$
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IP: 4D62 B819
cheack in....eye of da tiger...nice///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////.................................................. ...........
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06-30-03, 06:11 AM | #4 | |||||||
$LET ME CASH DA BLUNT$
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AITE EYE OF DA TIGER...I CUDNT BASES IT ALL ON DAT..BUT SUM IS....SUM HEAT..FOR DIS ON/////MONDAY MORNIN BORED..MITE AS
Last edited by UNDERATED~OVERHATED : 07-01-03 at 01:09 AM. |
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06-30-03, 07:23 AM | #5 | |||||||
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^^^^^^
interesting hmmmmmmmmm u went for a straight batteling approach which was weird, im more into the topical shit, great battle verse tho, lets see what happens on wednesday |
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06-30-03, 06:59 PM | #6 | |||||||
$LET ME CASH DA BLUNT$
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IP: 4E6E F498
dis is my first topical battle...so i just wrote my verse wit punches multies on sum based on eye of da tiger...just to get it flowin good.....i dont no wuts weird i run wit a differnt style...if the voters like it then they do..if they dont then they dont feel it ...then wuteva...but i think they will.....put sum heat up..make dis a good battle
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06-30-03, 07:45 PM | #7 | ||||
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^^ Your Verse Was Not a Topical... It Was A Battle Verse Dude...
Topical Verses Have A Story Behind Them.. Yours Was Just punches.. Like A Battle Verse Having To Do With 'Eye of The Tiger'.. Not A Topical... |
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07-01-03, 12:52 AM | #8 | |||||||
Jee-You Knit?
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Word^^^ Go into Closed Battles, and look at some of the battles in there. (fgee vs. Mad Man would be a good pick), and I will let you edit your verse, ok???
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07-01-03, 01:09 AM | #9 | |||||||
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IP: 54E1 B48B
aite dat sounds coo....//////////////////////////////////////////////////////
//////ill have it up before thursday |
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07-02-03, 04:04 PM | #10 | |||||||
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I have only edited the 31st line adding in a word coz i left it out when typing it up my bad. Enjoy
Eye of the tiger The predator, majestic, as I stroll across the mainland/ The forest of my territory is the place where I can expand/ My skills and knowledge, applied to my swampy habitat/ Yes im free from bars and cage, I don’t want to be labelled a big cat/ On a board that describes, the dangers and the whys/ Yes isn’t this the species from where all the original problems arise?/ Im not one of six billion, look at the notice, check the figure/ A.A Milne should be labelled a prophet, coz I could soon be the one and only tigger/ Im not a magic healer, leave me alone and ill be discreet/ Cook some other fancy herbs, for quacks to make ends meet/ Humans have their hands on our wheel, our futures are being controlled n driven/ We’d be either locked away or shot down, im afraid that was a given/ So remaining solitary was our last chance at being free/ If poachers happen to get lucky, they’ll only be taking me/ While my brother and sisters live on, unless they’ve already been took/ I bet some of these beasts are so hell bent, all they do is look/ And maybe they’ll get lucky there bullet, ll give chase/ Tony please throw that cereal box down and do something for your own race/ Fuck the merchandise deals and the stupid childish laughter/ Come back, defend the kind, who they painted your stripes after/ I can’t live with this threat much longer, but jail would just be giving up/ Tranquilizers or hard rounds, im still gonna hide and duck/ Coz out of them two places, not any I’d rather be/ True the mesh does provide safety, but I can’t live there you see/ I couldn’t bear little kids, their noses pressed up against the glass/ Teens flipping me the bird, when I could kick their scrawny ass/ The 2nd option does look bleaker, but I can be assured/ I’d come more expensive, than the common could afford/ My skin would be rubbed on old men, as they giggled with glee/ My teeth would be sold as jewellery, for a handsome fee/ Bones sold as treatments to no hopers, their last shot to avoid falling into the abyss/ Shit they’d probably put my eye in the Sly Stallone museum just to rip the piss// Last edited by The MRB : 07-03-03 at 05:49 AM. |
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07-02-03, 09:14 PM | #11 | |||||||
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MENTAL INSTITUTE...NICE SHIT MRB..
SOLITARY Minds of a mad mayne stuck in here since his youth/ scary images flashin thru trapped here for life in this institute/ wut shud i do,i still dont no wut got me here in da first place that one nite/ the scary part about this is i dont no wut my face looks like/ strugglin to see the lite,but i wake up an all i see is white/ walls covered by a foam,no way to escape besides eatin my way out/ so i spit till dawn,as da canibals an crazy eaters bump there head up an down/ scriptures out da holy quaran, bout a yung cat seekin for da crown/ lost it all in da quickest second,roundin out his clips till they empty/ the cost is life in a mental house,reckon for fags that attemp me/ the wrong time an place for a yung bluh to decent for peace/ but instead mas murdered 30 cats leavin em bloody deceast/ R.i.p to the ones who didnt deseve this .cuz of this beast/ trapped inside of me,prayin for a way out but nuthin can help my internal bleedin/ my closest dawgs deceived me so they were bound to get locked up in a coffin/ i wish dat was me..instead i cant breathe in this world so lost in/ born wit da eye but im still blind from the truth in disguise enlisted in the game/ sworn to ply out the skillz ,wit these freaky images enscriped in my brain/ missin my fame,cuz of one fuked up mistake costin me my life for them to take/ casted over my name is shame,discoverin the true facts of life/ switched the knife an the glock wit a pen an a pad frozen on ice/ my skillz still wont shine,as the tigers eye metamorphs into metaphores/ in this lines an walls i see my self dyin in the canibal hall/ set aside my lifes ambitions bumpin em as a ridah till its my call/ |
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07-03-03, 05:48 AM | #12 | |||||||
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^ yo underated i jus edited the 31st line, by adding word in mine coz i missed it out, hope ya ok wid that
thankz |
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07-03-03, 09:11 AM | #13 | ||||||
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Well both had pretty decent wordplay I liked MRB's imagery a little better, it was a bit childish but still good. The whole institue .... well I didn't feel the institute.... so yea, my vote goes to the MRB
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07-03-03, 01:46 PM | #14 | ||||||
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nice battle guys, on the real
MRB had real nice vocab and imagery and so did O~O...but MRB just had more... vote= MRB sand pop that in there for me will ya? |
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07-03-03, 03:28 PM | #15 | |||
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MRB dominated this for me, I really wasn't feelin the mental instituition piece.
It had some cool lines, but the actual tiger metaphor phucking owned. lol at the Winnie The Pooh line. vote=MRB Peace
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