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"Comin' Afta Ya"
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[Intro]
(Gangsta One): "Yo..." (Other guy): "What is it, dawg?" (Gangsta One): "Did that nigga jus' walk outta ma house?" (Other guy): "Huh? Hey, that son of a bitch did..! And he's holdin' ur fuckin' money man!" (Gansta One): "That...FUCKIN'...NIGGA!" BANG! [Chorus] COMIN'!// You can' run...// COMIN'!// You can' hide...// COMIN'!// Fuck nigga I've already one...// COMIN'!// So jus' sit there an' FUCKIN' DIE!// COMIN' AFTA YA!!// [Verse 1] Now some niggas push it real far// Next thing they know, they gettin; shot up by someone in a car// <SCREECH!!> Fuckin' pussys don' have the balls to face me, face-to-face// And them pussy niggas ain' nothin' but a fuckin' disgrace// In the 'Hood they think their King Shit o' Turd Island// <ploipl!> 'Till I be cockin' ma 9 and drive by 'em// It's so pathetic to see 'em on the ground coverin' they head// Well, guess what? TO BAD NIGGA U ALREADY DEAD!// Mama's cryin' over her los' son now, it's so sad...// <Cryin' mama> They say it's tragic when I son dies before their dad...// Well, that's what the nigga gets fo fuckin' 'roun with my crew// Don' blame me, thats how we do what we do...// [ChorusX2] [Verse 2] Seems that the cops foun' out what I had done...// Somebody's rattn' on me, he better run...// I've been arrested mo times than DMX has for trafficin'// But I've never been ratted on, how is this happenin'?// I had to run for ma black ass' life...// Can' go home, I would be endangerin' ma wife...// I was gettin' mad at the worl' for betraying me...// Why the FUCK was the worl' hating me?// So I ran again, from the flashin' red-blue lights, I wanted to hide// <Whoooooo....> This was some really fucked up ride// Like a worst nightmare comes true, only worse// I could picture in ma mind me laying in a big, black hurse// Oh it hurts// To see ma family to go through the worst// Even imagining it as I'm hidin' in the shadows...// Then I saw the river and ran for the shallows...// I prayed to the Lord to help me through// "I don' need anything else but You!" [ChorusX2] [Verse 3] Obviously, the Lord helped me that night...// The battle that I was about to engage was the wrong fight// So I gave myself in and they didn't shoot me...// And in the next couple of weeks they were through wit' me...// The nigga I shot didn't die...// And I said to myself: :What a lucky guy..."// [ChorusX4] [Outro] (Gangsta One): "Damn..." |
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Yo! Feedback plz! I will review yos if u f\give me some feedback!!!!
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BANNED For Being An Idiot
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Hey, Gangsta, I might wanna do another collab with ya
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FEEDBACK DAWGZ!!!!
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The Third Verse Was A Little Short, no? Only 12 Bars!
Any, The RHyming Here Was A Little Basic, BUt You Have Idea's, You Got Potential! This Could Have Been Better With Muti's, But It Wasn't Too Bad, I Can't Wait To See You Elevate Dawg, We Should Hook Up Some Time, PM me Or Somthing! Keep Spittin' |
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EVERYBODY HATES ME
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that shit was awesome
i hope u keep doin this shit |
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This Was Also Another Weak Peice..
The Whole Gangster Rap Thing On The Internet Is Pathetic. Weak Content, Basic Rhyme Scheme, Flow Was Pretty Weak . No Lines Had Any Content That Made Me Say "Nice" or What Not .. Weak Peice, I Give It A 2.
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