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07-04-03, 07:44 PM
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I'll Look At You
IP: 8229 A4FA
I'll look at you and tell you what I see
Something that's carmel complected Sweet like chocalate I see you and I'm ready to melt Because you look that good Tall like a tree With fire red rows Eyes that are heavy like weights And a smile that brightens a day |
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07-04-03, 09:05 PM
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Special Ghost To Blow
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IP: C1DA C961
Short But To The POint...Feels Like I Being Spoken To Forreal
Neve..Non The Less This Was Okay |
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07-05-03, 01:41 AM
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IP: 837C B7F6
haha nice poetry girl, short n sweet n cute
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07-05-03, 05:54 AM
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IP: 4F2B 4EA2
Heh.
Yeah, this was short, kind of to the point, and cute. I hate to use the word 'cute', but tis true, tis true...(!).. ...maybe could've been compressed a bit better. You know, for so few words and lines. But then again, it seems heartfelt. So it doesn't matter.. ..resp... |
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