Sphere of Bonded Bliss

Scripts typed, blood stained
The passion flows cold through my veins of pain.
No gain, strain arranged insane
My brain splattered like paint
Upon these abstract surfaces.
The outlines on the pavement
I can't stand to take it like lack of nourishment.
I can't say that I've had much encouragement.
I'd flourish rich will in rose pedal tips.
We already know whether this eclipse will severe.
Split leathery whips revealed unpleasantly.
Slavery wasn't a choice for all of us
The world is so shapeless in its symmetry.
A simile directing racial supremacy
Listening to the sounds of these rhythms and beats spinning.
Kindling war, defending
A lord of darkness maybe through our own ignorance
And tolerance.
Speaking, limited against the master
Leaning upon the arms of disaster.
Faster than a speeding bullet
The world spins cocoons of deadly dancers
By the pale moonlight
The devil answers
Quicker than the conscience generalizes its standards.
At last,
Century turns terror
Into the common vocabulary affair...
Soldier slayers we are;
Desperate to fight a war to establish peace with neighbors.
I'm trying to peace together...
Puzzle is in a million pieces
Piece by piece
I ask assistance please
Lord forgive us our debts
As we forgive our debtors
Whether they be alive or deceased.
No climate this vile
Has released such a beast of atrocity.
No system is perfect...many religions
You've heard it...it's not an isosceles.
In crime we weep,
Time depletes
Lines defeat my weaknesses.
With rhyme elite
Climb defeat
At the rate of sleeplessness.
The kind seem weak
But I rep One secret
To how this madness finishes.

-Dedicated to the new vision of overcast.

-addlibb

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very cool, i couldn't quite understand or get the rhythm right, but I think i felt it, rhymes are there, i think they would rhyme better when they are said, nice work
peace

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and we are the dreamers of dreams.

Quite brilliant actually...

Went off once or twice.

But to be frank, didn't matter much. Just that as i was reading it, towards the middle of the end, it didn't fit in with the brilliance of the piece.

But yeah, overall. It flowed effortlessly. The raw power and on the edge writing style really got me into it. The subject and meaning constantly being explored...

...noithing else to say, man...

..resp...

Thanks varentao, much appreciated

..pz

Yo Can i get some feedback plz.

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