A poem for a man who was there but unwilling to care




Whats a father?
A man who will do anything to make his son happy?
A man who will help his son when he needs it the most?
A man who teaches his son all about life?
A man that is there to talk to?
A man that is willing to listen as well as take advice?
A man to explain every little querry?
A man I don't know!

Tell me whut ya'll think

Short, simple with a real strength of emotion and thought to it.

It wasn't overly spectacular. Was what it was.

Fairly nice twist at the end, even though slightly predictable.

Fathers, eh?...

..resp..

I usually don't like short ones like this cause it's hard to feel what the writer is saying in just a few words. I liked this one. It was pretty good. You started out asking questions then at the end came with that line saying it's someone you don't know. Nice job..keep posting.

Thanx!