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Old 08-18-03, 04:51 PM   #1
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Heard Some Bad News

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Too long have I gazed at life in da wrong ways ,before I knew it, I stopped getting praised for things dat I say.
I live Life da Hard Way ,I's Got to keep on living dese streets each day ,N- get payed to raise my fa-mil-e
Im In-a another Country , where Im da Nigger , I feed off the weak , it keeps my mind bigger
And Harder , I got to keep strong , Can't die like a Martyr with a wasted song , end up where I don't belong
Be forgotten like a loser, another druguser , I am a chooser of Free Choice , Hear my Free Voice !
I keep screaming in-jus-tice , in the streets dis is a-hard-truth
I keep Searching for the right path , Careful' I don't get a foot up My Ass
I tiptoe thru minefields , I slap hoes in Highheels , My friend died-LastWeek-ITs For-Real
Missed his last meal -with da fams , Cause he was on da run , out on da Lamb
He ended up eating Lead-n-his-own-bonemarrow , instead of Ham, biscuits and Moms Cali-flowa
Now is my Darkest Hour , I feel like I could of done a little more
Instead I heard da news playing vids , sitting on my cold floor
Death in da News , rings true , its hurts you - in da worst way
You feel like a shadow , without power , 2 hours- is a long day
I heard some Bad News , gave me the Ol' Blues , I guess he paid his dues , da hard way.


Fuck It , I can't write anymore

Peace , CrazyE
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Old 08-18-03, 04:54 PM   #2
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TIGHTNESS FROM THE GATE TWIN REAL TO THE HEART AND REFLECTENT ON US AS WELL YOU STILL ORDO ABACHO
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Old 08-18-03, 05:39 PM   #3
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feelin' some parts... not all... your flow was staggered, the lines need to be evened out a bit more too.. some were to long an' others were too short (syllably speaking) .. other than that, up the vocab a bit, an' stay up... 1

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=74026
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