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Old 08-15-03, 06:14 PM   #1
2hot2handle
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my real feelin

IP: D4B3 F1B7

it feels like no matter how hard i try/
its like i dry out and die in the battles/
every one it like they against 2hot2handle/
they i say i need to elevate/
yeah sure i do, but i try to create/
the work and im just sayin what i feel/
everything is so real/
i cant win a fuckin battle against someone/
they just laughin and makin fun/
of me sayin im wack/
sayin rhymes i lack/
and when i feel like i might win/
they just trash me and throw me in a bin/
that makes me grin and mad/
thinkin im real bad but i just feel like they just wanna go after me/ but exactly i aint that bad at rhymes/
i at least deserve some votes but they just keep votin for the opponent/
and hate my content when im lashin out/
tellin about how much they suck/
and then they say what the fuck was that shit/
no matter what they say im a never quit/
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Old 08-15-03, 08:52 PM   #2
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nice way to let out ya feelings/aggression..never give up..never quit..bla bla bla..but u definately need to elevate..this was wack in all ways besides let n out ya feelings..flow was simple..no multis..content lacked..definately need to work on ya complexity..ya structure needs work..dont break lines up..

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they just laughin and makin fun/
of me sayin im wack/


like that..dont do that..dont break the line up just so it seems to rhyme..

u got a lot of elevate n to do..but if u really like rap n..etc..dont give up..not many ppl started out ill..majority of us had to elevate as we went..
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