My hearts so full of emotion…got feelings colliding like tides in the ocean..
Hearts worn down from this loving erosion…but it’s the path that I chosen..
As the doors of opportunity are closen..and I gotta follow the leaders like im posen..
And im just frozen…like a river cause my lyrics just arent flowen..
And im knowen..that im gonna be giving up sooner or later cause im not blowen..
Everythings always in a mixture..binded down by this emotional fixture..
I always find myself painting a losing picture..cause ya lyrics like gold, always richer
And I seem to always be in confusion…from constantly losen..
My shit will never be moven…like a river that’s not fluent..
And I cant get my shit fusion..so I cant get my skills proven..

just a quick keystyle..leave me some feedback on it, thanks.

thouht it was an alright read, it flowed good and i liked the use of multis, but dunno about wot you were sayin.............

not bad......HOLLA

Hey man thanks for the feedback, keep the feedback coming, its much appreciated, thanks.

This shit flowed real nice and the multis were great. Were you comparin your self to other emcees cuz thats what i got out of it.

Just keep elevating and using the emotion and you will succeed!!

PEEP MY SHIT
~1~

This was good i most technical ways........i think...

What the verse really lacked was Angst or whateva... some shit to make me feel what you feel....

I didn't get bit by your emotion... it almost kinda bored me...

keep workin on it...

{Peace}

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