Sidetracking a bit from my usual topical stuff... check it!

Hey yo, yo... real rap fanatics, gonna feel this rhyming addict, see I know my mathematics//
lyrically and literally, my art of rap is like a military infantry//
the messages I spit are like recruiters, my hostile rhymes are like sharpshooters, aiming at all intruders, while my dome is the intelligence team knowledge pursuer, with more data stored than Pentium computers//
So while your style be technologically in minimal, mine’s on Computer digital, not even Y2K could delete my Hard-drive lyrical constantly upgrading verbal visuals, don’t get it wrong the shit ain’t fictional...

I know I got y'all shivering, my math's equivalent, to 10 times what y'all delivering, I know y'all listening, and when I'm spitting in… y'all ears, it's total fear what y'all experiencing//
cause with this flow I run through foes like epidemics, have’em begging for a medic, got’em asking for prosthetics, shit’s pathetic, they don’t get it//
see the bullshit they spit is like venom, while my style is like the antidote serum, they don’t spit math using my mathematics theorems…

Yo... I'm caught with a rap flow disease that has no remedy, I'm sickening those who listen to my melody, don’t even need to speak I'll reach most just with telepathy//
I’m lyrically impulsive, my rhymes are self-conductive, always verse productive, with these lines y'all minds gon' be abducted//
but It’s been a long time since I emerged, rhyming is now a biological urge, invading minds to cause a psychological splurge//
rhyming faster than Ultra Sonic, mixing poetry and Ebonics, got y’all jumping like hydraulics, off the walls, neurotic, psychotic and all//
These verses man be terminal, I pump gray matter chemicals, like they be fucking seminal fuel, and now I see you want to duel//
with my verbal content, but shit’s too complex, take a shot you get a knot in your cerebral cortex//
yeah… even the rumors causing tumors in your brain, they say I’m humored every time I hear your name…

a bit long, yeah... but if you read all.... then thanx... let me know what ya'll think... Peace

come on, I'm trying something different here... tell me something... lol....

yo this is real different to your usual stuff, but it works man tight flow, a complex one but you maintain it good and make it work man. im feelin this. yo check out for the youth please, i jus dropped it. peace.

...Yo... have you read any of my other stuff? lol....
Anyways dawg, thanx for replying...

this piece was ill, nice vocab, good multis, nice imagery, tight ryhme scheme, well laid out piece,keep droppin,by tha way i appreciate tha replies u hit my pieces up wit,keep it real playa.~1~

this shit is nice and you had it down paked
the shit was ill
yo check my post out its called> my life my life/jus a lil sum


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yo no doubt Diverse...
^sure I'll take a look at yours.... thanx

yo man that shit was tight, lotsa complexity, and real tight wordplay and structure. was feelin it the whole way through nice piece man.

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cool, thanx... like I said, I'm in to topicals, but every now and then I like to drop some straight spittin' senseless shit... lol... hahaha
I'm glad y'all is feeling it...

uppin'... some more feedback you be cool... lol...