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lukeyb16 | 0 | 0% | |
WORD~PERFECT | 1 | 100.00% | |
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09-02-03, 08:51 AM | #1 | |
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lukeyb16 vs word~perfect
IP: 19AF 50C1
no d/r
5 votes explain votes post due 2o mins from checking in best of luck and no crew votes from either crew im in this is no beaf battle just for kicks |
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09-02-03, 09:25 AM | #2 | |
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IP: 19AF 50C1
where are you twin.............................................. .................................................. ..................................................
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09-02-03, 09:59 AM | #3 | |
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IP: 19AF 50C1
check in now i see your here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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09-02-03, 10:18 AM | #4 | |
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IP: 19AF 50C1
am I your first battle? then select your words wisely-
count your blessing… your lukey (lucky) (you) b16 or id CURSE you with a parental advisory- I’m WORD PERFECT like the windows program-with enough ram-cramned- Into my head to bitch slap this man-with PUNCH~lines till he’s tattooed by my hand- When will you understand- This is one on one there is no room for a HALF ASS to spit- you get ripped with that wack script you coming with- once I unload it’ll take 2 OF YOU TO DROP SHIT- no doubt!!!!! You called me out- come equipped with an escape route- or kill me with your first rap- cause once I open my MOUTH- your TRAPP~ed- (“trap another word for mouth”) I only spit heat the type of son(sun)~burn to change your melon complection- Oh you better then WORD P? must have turn~ed and grilled my reflection- Im that type,plus twice as nice- and this was a freestyle damn I should of raised the price- this kid couldn’t hang with this god if he was a crucified CHRIST- my BODY of rap is as VITAL as any appendage- of coarse LUKEY wanted to battle WP thinking he could up his (W)in (P)ercentage- this a CLOSED BATTLE not a CLOSE BATTLE when I inflict terror- exposte you like a MAXIM shoot with CHRISTINA AGUILLERRA- they call me WORD PERFECT I expose each of your type~o~graphical ERRORS- from dissing me to battling me actually- I use the 6th sence… you already a casuality- You couldn’t rock if you were TOPAZ- In the present I amass the type of delivery to leave you looken silly in the past- You confuse metaphors and similies with your sexuality cause all you (like)(is)(as)- RAPBATTLES is my home don’t trespass- (like is a word used in many metaphors) (as and is are common in similies) your weak metaphors-is out~classed like freshmen’s and sophomores- like ford vs accord-im just playing you this is how I strum the chords- with words that merge-and submerege- you must have had the urge-surge- to get your cherry popped cause im on the VERGE-VIRG(IN)- killing you is how i sruvive-you b16 which means you cant even ride or die-you fake gangsta you aint even old enough to drive. |
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09-02-03, 10:21 AM | #5 | |
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IP: 19AF 50C1
before i forget no verse feeding neither........................................... .................................................. ....
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09-02-03, 10:42 AM | #6 | |
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im waitin for lukey to bust then ill give an honest vote >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.................................................. .................................................. ................
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09-02-03, 10:55 AM | #7 | |
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IP: 19AF 50C1
your late on your verse are you posten twin you been viewing this already longer then 40 minutes........................................... .................................................. ...................
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09-02-03, 10:57 AM | #8 | |
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IP: 7B35 12A0
in a really quick time i could get a name/
but fuck u minors id rather wait for the fame/ and i dont give a shit if you mans think im wack/ your lucky its online or else you would get a slap/ i thank you word perfect for helping me out at first/ all these other mutherfuckas were scared to hear my verse/ and i respect you cus you were the first to attack/ cus ive got what these other rappers lack/ we should have done audio because text is wack/ theres a very big diffrence bewtween typing and rap/ these rappers are scared when it comes face 2 face/ the only way u can beat me is by cutting and paste/ thats the only way is to use my own shit against me/ dont get angry and temp me its only a friendly/ im going to stop this rhyme now cus ive done enough/ your long rhymes are weak and my short rhymes are tough/ |
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09-02-03, 11:06 AM | #9 | |
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IP: 19AF 50C1
aight then the votes begin............................................. .................................................. ................................................
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09-02-03, 12:51 PM | #10 | |
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IP: 19AF 50C1
damn this will be slept on.....i can tell .................................................. .................................................. .
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09-02-03, 04:33 PM | #11 | |
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UPPIN............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....
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09-03-03, 01:44 AM | #12 | |
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IP: 19AF 50C1
WTF............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........
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09-03-03, 02:26 AM | #13 | |
Middle Weight
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09-03-03, 02:29 AM | #14 |
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IP: E7FC C34C
PS. WORDPERFECT took this... begining was wack... you need to fix your bar structure... you got potential... i saw some creativity and potentially original punches.. your verse was ok.. but you could do with structure.. STRONG multis... mark my words... yada yada yada all the ingredients of a good verse... check the good verses as example... and study them to see what i mean... if you want references... i can help you with that
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09-03-03, 02:34 AM | #15 | |
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IP: 19AF 50C1
i'll take the help i need it................................................ .................................................. ...............................
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