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the elements
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there is a chemistry in rap that has to be proceeded/
its something that this industry has to reach yet/ its the elements that contributes heart and passion for this feelin/ without elements it will be all trash and no structure/ its like rap would be a person on crutches and its something you cant get enough of/ its the love that creates the formula that goes through a cycle/ this game right now is in a pile with great style/ but needs elements to create the strong piece of the industry to express all the shit that they have felt/ keepin it all gangsta and street with the ghetto beat/ releasin it all from the beginning and goin currently/ but recently you gotta keep it goin and dont stop/ keepin this shit all hip hop that is so amazin/ im just blazin with these lyrical flows that keep poeple crazin/ its all wild and wouldnt be without the elements/ without it rap would have no offense or defense for innocence/ does that make sense? if you said no you havent been listenin/ now im just lay back with the elements just flowin while im chillin/
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aight, u gotta either have a rhyme scheme or not... u kept switchin, in tha type of poem u did u can't do that, it won't sound right and it didn't sound right here niether, as a poem, it wasn't deep enough and i didn't feel like it was a poem, more of a quick off tha mind rap, (not a freestyle) jus keep droppin and elevate and u'll find ur own style...
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^^^^^^i agree.~1~
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