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Notebook Piece: Time Travellin'
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The Third And Final Jotted Piece From My Rhyme Book, Its Incomplete, The Basic Idea I Had Was To Go Through Various Stages In Time And Describe What Happened Etc. .
It Was Gonna Go The Ice Age, Victorian Era, World War II, Present Day, The Future, But I Didnt Finish It, This Is As Far As I Got. . The Ice Age Its frozen madness, temperaures low, w/ the cold comes sadness Surrounded by More Ice than Platinum Chain Wearing Rappers Searchin` for fabric and warmth against the Vlad of the storm In the form of either a hunted deer's fur or skin of wolf. Drips of blood in the snow show him a predators near The roof of a sabre tooth's jaw leaves him embedded in fear. He'd never shedded a tear, his lead spear kept him protected Bare in mind, this was long before the fire or wheel were invented Tormented by the cold, his chosen goal findin a place to rest But his stated quest never ended as the caveman met his death. . The Victorian Era Cholera spread by rats, people at the time laughed As the working class forced their first born down mine shafts. High hats were male fashion, women wore ball gowns As the poor slaved for days for an honest half-crown. Run down back to back slums, sewage swabbing the streets Where even Local Butchers struggled to make ends Meat. Cleanliness was reserved for those who could afford it Anasthetic came later, in those days - they Sawed Limbs! Carriages pulled by horses was the transport of the era Waiting w/ baited breath as coal miners deaths became nearer. . World War II Soldiers supported the cause, and fought with a passion Back home away from the war, mothers Thought with a Ration. Rotten stenches from the bottom trenches brought tears to some loved ones became statistics, respected over the years to come. . Thats as far as i got, read it for what its worth, you either love me or hate me, lol. .i only posted it for the kids who wanted to see this. . |
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