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09-03-03, 03:37 PM | #1 | ||||||
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This is ya boy...im new to this internet rappin shit but check this out
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fuk all u fake gangstas talkin bout nines that spit/
ice u rock-stash u got an how u aint legit/ internet gangstas ready to drop wen it comes 2 keystyles/ but if u step on the streets u wont breathe now/ its all fake-masquerades of how u livin dangerous/ wen half of ur raps bitten -admit it- u a plagerist/ an fuk wanna b emcees if you got skills then drop/ insted of dickrydin real emcees you jus need to get off/ fuk writin manuscripts cause half of u dont get it/ but if you feel wat im sayin-son-ya neva forget it/ im about to show fools how to drop punchlines/ they gettin no chance like a soldya on frontlines/ wen u battle me you walk into certain death/ snatch the ground you walk on an u takin ya las breath/ make magic look like childsplay wen i slay em the right way/ confused they leave brusied seein stars wen its plain day/ fuk it-i aint even gonna attempt to start shit- i burn like fire-an the mics wat i light wit... wassup i need a crew? A-Town yeah shawty
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09-03-03, 04:02 PM | #2 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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it had flow and you stayed on topic it was alittle low in volcab and the topic's been done but for a first time i think this was really good keep working at it
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09-04-03, 03:10 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 67D2 02F8
NEED SOME FEEDBACK....AND A CREW TO RUN WIT
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09-04-03, 03:16 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 67D2 02F8
WHATS REALLY NICE?
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