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10-13-03, 11:59 PM | #1 | |
Sand
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Empty thoughts.
IP:
asleep on my block, my cardboard box
central ave. where what your looking for was lost or caught, by someone undeserving murmuring about how the boy stopped his drumming you see i lost all of my teeth so each night i leave my cup out as i sleep up on them but hey, the tooth fairy isn't coming. so you see every second in time is second to life, i come first but each time i beg it hurts, this condition where people offer their two cents, but i say fuck their opinions because 4 is better, and a quarter is magnificent and dollars. holy shit kids, i cry to sit with it die to spend one. try to let some into my next slum from place to place, money is my only ethic. albuquerque to new york to san francisco jersey and china. empty desires feed for empty thoughts i could buy ya.
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10-14-03, 12:08 AM | #2 | ||
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IP:
Sand, You Amaze Me yet Again.
You Take Such A Simple Point Of View And Make It So Complex And Make It Nearly Perfect. Awesome Job Alex. Keep This Shit Coming. |
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10-14-03, 12:20 AM | #3 | ||
Tampons are expensive
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IP:
Random stuff sometimes is really fun to write about ..I mean just not caring about the whole scheme but just what comes to your mind but at the same time giving it an artistic style kinda way.
Well its hard to say its empty cuz some of it makes sense. Your a great writer and you put the same amount of emotions in ur works. I loved it.
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<br><br><center>- Shiznit - - Tampons are still expensive - - That's a Fact - </center> |
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10-14-03, 12:37 AM | #4 | |
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IP:
THIS WAS A HOT JOINT PULLING everything togeather though so many scattered concepts were there.
you did it brilliantly and i cant waite to see more |
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10-14-03, 02:19 AM | #5 | |
BANNED
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IP:
yeah that was an ill drop dawg i love the subject and u just turned it into words so well i enjoyed readin it.. the vocab was ill along wit the flow and everythin
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10-14-03, 02:32 AM | #6 | ||
Banned for being stupid
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IP:
this was off the fuckin hook homie......a simple topic turned into some great shit....i was feelin ur vocab and wordplay...like i said u had a simple topic, but made for a great read...overall excellent drop homie.....
peace...... |
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