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Sorry Mama
IP: 16AE 11D3
You'll never change me/
I'll always be the same/ I was raised in Brokka so i got tossed in this game/ You cant blame me coz shit, i am what i am/ I swear its not my fault, i do what i can/ But what your asking of me is to much, this is shit/ Give me one chance and i'll be gone quick as lickety split/ I love you and all that but i let you all down/ I think you'd be better of if i wernt around/ I got a fucked up head through all the liquer i've drunk/ But that aint the worst of it ; the speed and the skunk/ I'm the shit nobody wants stuck with/ The one that every lad on the block trys to fuck with/ Evil personified/ Thats what i am so sorry to all y'all, my dad and my mam/ I wont ask for anything, ever again/ If you can just accept that i too, go through pain/ And maybe one day tell me that i made you proud/ Even once, make a change from the times that we've rowed/ Cause i do love you, no matter how i act/ And i'm sorry for all the times that i've cracked/ And gave you an earful of shit I deserved/ Sorry to all y'all forgive me, its not my fault i'm absurd/ big up y'all tell me wot y'all think of this shit...... |
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uuhh ELAVATE...your flows fuckin way off, your vocabulary is shot ta hell...the only half decent thing in this is your emption...maybe you should try writting a poem an then try to make it more complex that may help you peace check myn out..."different teritorial flow"
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