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It's Over and Done...
IP: 8BEC CACE
Apocalypse creeps through, we witness Priest Sododomy/
As He breaks his vows, to be exploring a childs Biology/ The Apocalypse breaks through, the End ,we're told is near/ Before they didn't want to listen To God's Word, now they fear/ What is the worst to come, the death toll seems great/ Killings of all those who go against God,no time to hesitate/ Destruction began, we hate the 9/11 terror attacks/ But through the eyes of the "terror", their cause stays intact/ Think about it this way, when we fought for our revolution/ When we attacked the British, our home country,with an illusion/ We fought the British, so our war was like a terror attack/ When 9/11 came, their cause was to destroy Foreign influence in Iraq/ So before you judge other, you must look upon to yourself/ Realize the value of things that happened,seein you don't have much wealth/ You must figure out the death of pieces that fit in the puzzle/ Because like the Revolution, the taliban faces the same struggle/ They want to be free of our control, free of our Ideas/ Leave their country alone, We have our own lives we have to steer/ 9/11 had a cause, if you look through their eyes it wasn't evil/ But it was more than the smoke of the towers to blind us,cuz I can see though/ How we acted before, how we are acting again/ Its a war for a lost cause, it started but we never gon win/ The Apocalypse is bound to happen, Like it or Not/ on another note, It's September 14th,where is 2Pac? ![]()
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nice fav line:The Apocalypse is bound to happen, Like it or Not/
on another note, It's September 14th,where is 2Pac? |
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Straight Savage.
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IP: 8BEC CACE
Like that reply....^^^^
Cam's thread really didn't help out did it?
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^^Camarac........i got u a Herb^^ for the list
Well Skiddlezz nice drop.u had some good vocab in here, ...a real nice flow.... i was feelin ur drop, ...i specially liked these lines ''Destruction began, we hate the 9/11 terror attacks/ But through the eyes of the "terror", their cause stays intact/ Think about it this way, when we fought for our revolution/ When we attacked the British, our home country,with an illusion/'' Oldo the concept, was not that new^^, but still a desent piece I really enjoyed readin this, ..drop more pieces like this, props** Last edited by Tha ReaLiTY : 09-14-03 at 07:35 PM. |
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Straight Savage.
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IP: 8BEC CACE
It really sucks when I have to up my piece a day after only on 2 replies.
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IP: B2E8 21DD
good:
vocabulary structure flow ways to improve: multies mataphores Return the favor with an honest vote: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79685 |
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