We Da Illest, the thrillest, givin you hyper active brain waves makes us kill-it/
Cryptic tonic in amneisic blood, sounds stage ready, crowds enter like a flood/
Rockin the mic like it aint right, spitten curel inteintions like a virgin is tight/
Quite specifiaclly, spit significantly, droppin lines like a horny fat kid on a date/
5 Line drop got you qivering, snakein up on you, sliterin, this is only the beginning/

Just something short, I want to fucken battle, but hey it aint that bad.

Drop some feedback.

good vocab, nice concept, bars were lill short but it waz gooood

Thanks, I have gotton that on every single open mic I have had, so that must mean I am pretty good.

Alright uppin for some more feedback.

good drop homie...short but nice vocab an flow...next time drop summin a lil bigger lol...better to read cuz that didnt really have a good ending...i thnik you it wud have sounded better if you made it better good flow though man lates peep mine "different taritorial flow" lates

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good flow my nigga it could have been just a little bit longer but i was really feelin the vocab.

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Yeah, well I was feeling a little bit inspirational so I just decided to drop somthing short and to the point. My other ones will be longer I can assure that.

that was pretty good, the vocab kicked ass, the wordplay was good, but i do think it needs to be a little longer, nice drop though. keep postin.