i did post this to use against biddy central but the faggot never showed...so I can't let it go to total waste

Created:
From Dirt to Concrete
We Got The Front Row Seat
We See What You Dream
It's More Complex Than A Pipedream
Problems Stretch For Miles and Miles
It's Intricate Style is Elaborate Textiles
Our Families Breakdown For the World To See
We Don't Get Help Until We Make It Deadly

Deals:
It's Not As Often As People Think
Ethopians Get Water More Constant To Drink
Compared To The Quantity That Is Moved
Our Voices Are Heard When We Get Grooved
Smack, Weed, Dust, and Acid
In Worse Situations We Even See Blood
It's Something We Cannot Control
Heard Quieter Than Unborn Souls

Slums vs Suburbia:
Two Different World With Many Similarities
Both Sides Have Too Many Rowdies
One's Got Something To Prove
The Other's Got To Maintain it's Groove
It's Something Politicians Continue To Ignore
How Many People Get Eye's All Sore
It's Definately Not Pretty To Stare At
But We Were Dealt This Format
Graffiti And Heathans Overpopulate
Rich Bitches Always Pickin Wrong Times To Ovulate
Hooker on The Streets Doin This To Survive
Girls Havin Sex To Give Them a Jive
Addicts Can't Get Off The Drugs
Guys Doin It to Imitate Thugs

Help:
What Can We Do, We Have No Limbs
We Just Watch to See How Futures Get Dim
We Get Stepped On Till No End
Were Treated Like An Enemy, Not a Friend
We Can Only Breakdown to Be Dangerous
And For A Kid to Be Brainless
Takes Our Corner Too Fast
Watch As His Future Becomes His Past
Than Only Do The People Listen To Our Cry
We Are The Streetz, We Need Your Reply

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I Speak Out
Battles
Pink Slips 007 Pt. 2

lookin for some feedback....

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Battles
Pink Slips 007 Pt. 2

i liked it, seemed to flow good, i liiked the structure an the topic, it was a good piece, i was felein it man...8/10 check out my callab with puglist.."book of rhymes" lates

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

uppin for feedback

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I Speak Out
Battles
Pink Slips 007 Pt. 2

uppin for feedback

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I Speak Out
Battles
Pink Slips 007 Pt. 2

uppin for feedback

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Battles
Pink Slips 007 Pt. 2

tight to me i like the reflection peace and lyrical delivery hot joint pop

uppin

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Battles
Pink Slips 007 Pt. 2

Decent, You Need More Internals Though . .

Keep Writing . .

Werd . . .