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09-21-03, 09:12 PM
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Tripology.. Camarac & FaZe²
IP: 3A76 93FE
Tripology
Originally a 3 man collab but the other person did not show... Im so Sick and Tired of seeing my own Life Fade ive Pay more Tolls then Death & still i havent Paid. Ingulfed in Hate - im Gods one and only Mistake so i Hide from those that made me disown my Fate. im Building up Rage, i could Burst at any Moment my Atoms part, because my death lurks Upon Them. those Hurtful Comments - i feel im the Scum of Earth i even despise myself. .my life has nothing, no Worth. im blessed with pains Curse, im hated for Entertainment marks on my soul, where those words En-Graved In. never given a chance - no notions of Apologies so I let my anger out here. .with in this Tripology Im so sick and tired of being the Sick and Tired View in the Distance that Persistant Youthfull Indifferent hidden below Truthfull Eclipses. these lunar linguistics from the God seen odyssey of our Tri-Pology, are offering a Bargain Plee in Anonymousity to be-rid of the Poverty. Honestly, i could Count My Blessings with One Hand, rule of thumb Youth unsung gettin into the Swing of things, w/ a crystal Pendulum, That Fuels The Sum of this Alumini, to the Human Eye, i Design Fate Mature with Age like a Fine Wine, walking this Time Line til it breaks. Primate Descendant placed Rhyme to Sentence and forgotten respect creating a Positive Effect, they who Seek the Peak of the Opposite Sex Often whats left is unwanted love, many hearts broken and following, and Your the joke Their Swallowing, as Love completes our Tri-Pology. |
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09-21-03, 09:22 PM
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ShO-Nuff. Fuckers
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IP: 399E F0FD
Damn....very good i like it..
faze ure getting better.. u got the right person to teach ya.. Camarac that was Ill.....
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09-21-03, 09:30 PM
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IP: 3A76 93FE
Thank you very much Bribe, i did get the right teacher. Im glad he puts up with my shit
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09-21-03, 09:40 PM
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IP: 399E F0FD
yeah that was a nice ass piece my niggas.
favorite bar never given a chance - no notions of Apologies so I let my anger out here. .with in this Tripology hot flow. Last edited by mr.iceman : 09-21-03 at 09:45 PM. |
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09-21-03, 10:23 PM
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IP: D0E7 213C
Yeah no doubt, this shit was off the hook dawg, I liekd the wordplay, but your ryhme scheme needs work just a few touch ups dawg and youll be TIGHT, overall you can elevate dawg, but seriously, this was some nice shit...
thanks for the reply for my shit dawg. Last edited by Fazt Klikkz : 09-21-03 at 10:26 PM. |
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09-21-03, 10:54 PM
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IP: 3A76 93FE
Uppin This Sheeit . .
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09-22-03, 04:39 AM
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IP: 6B19 E604
tight piece,vocab was ill,imagery was vivid, structure was on point,wordplay was ill, all in all i give this collab a 10 out of 10
my favorite line(s) Quote:
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09-22-03, 07:37 AM
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IP: FF40 570D
Nice
Good flow, nice concept.......overall good piece Specially liked this line/begin... Im so Sick and Tired of seeing my own Life Fade ive Pay more Tolls then Death & still i havent Paid. Props Pz
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09-22-03, 07:40 AM
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IP: 3A76 93FE
^^ Thank You . . Uppin This Ma Fucka !
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09-22-03, 07:52 AM
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Banned
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IP: E7EA F80F
Im so Sick and Tired of seeing my own Life Fade
ive Pay more Tolls then Death & still i havent Paid. Nice Line Ingulfed in Hate - im Gods one and only Mistake so i Hide from those that made me disown my Fate. Tight im Building up Rage, i could Burst at any Moment my Atoms part, because my death lurks Upon Them. nice those Hurtful Comments - i feel im the Scum of Earth i even despise myself. .my life has nothing, no Worth. Coolness im blessed with pains Curse, im hated for Entertainment marks on my soul, where those words En-Graved In. Nice.. never given a chance - no notions of Apologies so I let my anger out here. .with in this Tripology Nice.. Im so sick and tired of being the Sick and Tired View in the Distance that Persistant Youthfull Indifferent hidden below Truthfull Eclipses. Nice.. these lunar linguistics from the God seen odyssey of our Tri-Pology, are offering a Bargain Plee in Anonymousity to be-rid of the Poverty. Nice.. Honestly, i could Count My Blessings with One Hand, rule of thumb Youth unsung gettin into the Swing of things, w/ a crystal Pendulum, Nice vocab That Fuels The Sum of this Alumini, to the Human Eye, i Design Fate Mature with Age like a Fine Wine, walking this Time Line til it breaks. Nice Flow Primate Descendant placed Rhyme to Sentence and forgotten respect creating a Positive Effect, they who Seek the Peak of the Opposite Sex Nice.. Often whats left is unwanted love, many hearts broken and following, and Your the joke Their Swallowing, as Love completes our Tri-Pology. This was coolness right here best part in ya verse.. This was a good open mic piece there were no flaws so keep this coming mang 1.. |
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