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=-_OutWrite_-= 5 83.33%
COM 1 16.67%
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Old 09-25-03, 09:47 AM   #1
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COM Vs OUTWRITE

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10 lines, we drop together

I'mma kill this racist fucka
talkin bout WHITE POWER and fuck black people
i'm white and even I think he's a asshole
 
Old 09-25-03, 10:15 AM   #2
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NO VOTES FROM ENVY NY OR THE OMENS OR REGIME
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Old 09-25-03, 10:28 AM   #3
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This Is A Toss Up Like Salad; You Got No Meat-In-Your-Sound
And I’m Still Way Above You With My Feet-On-The-Ground
I Sleep Well When I’m Dreaming Coz I Sonn-You-In-The-Clouds
Yeah This Guys A Vet He Sticks Thermometers-In-Cows
I’m Proud To Scream Aloud I’m White And Spite This Fucking Coward
OutWrite Aim’ed Me Tonight Quoting “Fuck The Blacks… White Power”
This BOY Can’t Rhyme Or Shave And I’m The Man To Show-Em
Ghost Writing Doesn’t Mean Post Your Dead Grandmas Poem
Lightweights? I Throw-Em, For Every Played Line I Deduct-Ya
You Can’t Move When I Cut-Ya Like An Alien Abductor
 
Old 09-25-03, 10:28 AM   #4
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OutWrite Productions...

One More Tiiiime,..

Check It



Com You Act Like r A Big Shot And Goin Places
But Ur Crew Couldent Get Signed If I Autographed Ya Faces
I Needed Some One To Merk, Im So Glad I Found You
Call My Punches Mom And Dad Cuz When They Hit It Grounds Yo
Watch Me Turn This Dude Over Like A NewBorn And Beat His Ass
Cut Out Ur Spinal Chord, Give It To Ur Crew So They Got Ur Back
I Can Tell Ur Weak, And You Dont Wanna Beef Wit Me In The Streets
But The One That Comes After RB Dot Is The Only COM We Need

No Beef....Just Music
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Nawfik's Out, Back To Chi...........
 
Old 09-25-03, 11:36 AM   #5
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Com You Act Like r A Big Shot And Goin Places
But Ur Crew Couldent Get Signed If I Autographed Ya Faces
I Needed Some One To Merk, Im So Glad I Found You
Call My Punches Mom And Dad Cuz When They Hit It Grounds Yo
^^^pure illness

Watch Me Turn This Dude Over Like A NewBorn And Beat His Ass
Cut Out Ur Spinal Chord, Give It To Ur Crew So They Got Ur Back
I Can Tell Ur Weak, And You Dont Wanna Beef Wit Me In The Streets
But The One That Comes After RB Dot Is The Only COM We Need
^^^best part

outwrite won this with better punches overall... com had a decent verse but it wasnt up to par with outwrite's... better flow also... good battle

vote = outwrite
 
Old 09-25-03, 04:57 PM   #6
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iight..

Flow - OUTWRITE
Punches - OUTWRITE
Werdplay - TIE
Creativity - OUTWRITE
Complexity - TIE
Personals - NONE
Multies - COM
Vocab - COM
Metas - TIE
Consistency - OUTWRITE

iight...outwrite won this wit betta punches overall...COM's verse wuzn't at all bad..juss wuzn't as good as OUT'S...nice battle

VOTE - OUTWRITE
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Old 09-25-03, 06:09 PM   #7
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i thought COM took this....

COM's Verse:nice punches.....nice wordplay...structure was good...nice flo...overall he had the better verse

Outwriteunches wernt bad but were played...ur structure was good..flo wasnt bad..overall ok verse

outwrite has some played concept in his verse and com had harder hitting punches

Vote:COM
 
Old 09-25-03, 08:41 PM   #8
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Hmmm...Pretty Nice Battle Here...

COM Came Out Aight...Tossin Salads...PLAYED!...Multi's Seemed Forced But You Did Produce A Few Decent Punches...

OutWrite Had A More Original Verse...Couple Played Lines...Had Nice, Hard Punches In Ya Verse...Thats What Won It 4 Ya...

Good Battle...

Vote - OutWrite
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Old 09-25-03, 08:45 PM   #9
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Com You Act Like r A Big Shot And Goin Places
But Ur Crew Couldent Get Signed If I Autographed Ya Faces
I Needed Some One To Merk, Im So Glad I Found You
Call My Punches Mom And Dad Cuz When They Hit It Grounds Yo
^^^pure illness

Watch Me Turn This Dude Over Like A NewBorn And Beat His Ass
Cut Out Ur Spinal Chord, Give It To Ur Crew So They Got Ur Back
I Can Tell Ur Weak, And You Dont Wanna Beef Wit Me In The Streets
But The One That Comes After RB Dot Is The Only COM We Need
^^^best part

outwrite won this with better punches overall... com had a decent verse but it wasnt up to par with outwrite's... better flow also... good battle

vote = outwrite
Choo dis man outwrite is sick no hate

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Old 09-25-03, 08:46 PM   #10
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Com You Act Like r A Big Shot And Goin Places
But Ur Crew Couldent Get Signed If I Autographed Ya Faces
I Needed Some One To Merk, Im So Glad I Found You
Call My Punches Mom And Dad Cuz When They Hit It Grounds Yo


Flow - OUTWRITE
Punches - OUTWRITE
Werdplay - TIE
Creativity - OUT
Complexity - out
Personals - out

vote- outwrite.....1

hit this up.....1

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=81382
 
Old 09-25-03, 08:53 PM   #11
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Outwrite got this battle outright...he had some bad ass punches, personals and wordplay...he had some sick lines that made me laugh and his punches hurt as well...Com didn't come that hard in the battle, and he coulda done better...some of his punches didn't make sense...

VOTE=OUTWRITE
 
 


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