10 lines
no bullshit votes.
both verses due within 30 min after check in
good luck

Where you at rapp-ad?, your 30 minutes is up!! LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ya Flows Are Outdated Get A Slogan Jerk
Before I Rip You Quicker Then A Hulk Hogan Shirt
Leave Ya Ruptured, Having This Sucker Suffer
With His Body Spaced Apart, Like The Solar System Structure
Wow, Open Is Worse Then A Dissapointment To Herbs
You Couldn't Have A Point To Your Words If you Put Your Mouse To Join Your Words
Open's Carcass Was Found Secluded In A Coffin
He Witnessed The Power Of The Tools I'm Using often
I've Beaten You So Bad It Seems Like I Have A Cavalry
I Guess Open Must Be Mad Since His Post Count Resembles His Yearly Salary

30 minutes exactly herb.......and in fact your 30 minutes are up , rules said check in immediately.

Don't matter, take as long as you want, you've been merked.
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LET'S GO:

You posted up a fake RAPP-AD- this is your first rhyme in your RAP-PAD//
29+26 equals 55 times you've been lost in a CRACK-LAB//
(29-26=WINS AND LOOSES)

Consume this situation by me droppin your heart to your stomach- thats the only way you can beat your beef//
he couldn't rap if he was in plastic- your fake like Whitneys teeth//

Your like the measles destroying your life for facts//
i'm like a nucleic acid tract decapitating your carbohydrated fats for tax//

My anger is enclaved so i guess your death is claustrophobic//
I bring killer calibur power components to this opponent-that'll have him doin backflips like monkey gym aerobics//

FINISH HIM:
I'll surgecly go in your veins so your heart can depart the ocean//
The only time his RAPPS been smooth is when he gave an AD for victoria secret lotion//

DONE

VOTES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!THANX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!

Ight, this battle was okay

breakdown

Ya Flows Are Outdated Get A Slogan Jerk (wack)
Before I Rip You Quicker Then A Hulk Hogan Shirt(ehhhh decent)
Leave Ya Ruptured, Having This Sucker Suffer (average)
With His Body Spaced Apart, Like The Solar System Structure (!!!!)
(nice shit)
Wow, Open Is Worse Then A Dissapointment To Herbs(just a flow)
You Couldn't Have A Point To Your Words If you Put Your Mouse To Join Your Words (not bad)
Open's Carcass Was Found Secluded In A Coffin(just a flow)
He Witnessed The Power Of The Tools I'm Using often(.....and?)
I've Beaten You So Bad It Seems Like I Have A Cavalry(fairly decent)
I Guess Open Must Be Mad Since His Post Count Resembles His Yearly Salary(not bad)

rest of Open's verse was fairly decent

i'm like a nucleic acid tract decapitating your carbohydrated fats for tax// (nigga, wtf u in? Chemistry class? honestly, i think only nerds would drop a punchline like that lolol, no hate)

and it made no sense, acid....fats....TAX>>>>> where that come from???

Vote = Rappad
for an overall better verse

hit dis battle up with an HONEST VOTE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81559

breakdown:---

flow + structure=rappad
punches=tie
origanality=open
wordplay=open
metas=rappad
muti's=?
overall=rappad.............just about tho.....props to both

hit this up................cheers.......

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=81309

You Couldn't Have A Point To Your Words If you Put Your Mouse To Join Your Words

^^my bad the last word should have been verse not words, but w/e

first time uppin 2-0
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Personally I thought this was an Ok battle...Rap I've seen u come harder than this....Anyway OPEN MINDED u need to shorten up those extended lines, fucks ya flow all up.......Other than that u have some good concepts...But I gotta give this battle to Rap for better Punches Flow and overall enjoyability..

Vote = Rappad

Hit My battle up wit Alpha Bet would ya?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81512

Also Peeps the one in my sig 2 against ThugsDoCry
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second uppin now.....

uppin for the 3rd time vote up folks
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i think rappad had the more creative disses...punches hit good...he had a weak opener tho...that hulk line is really played like {99}ha ha lol!! but anyway...overall nicest verse

open was a lil to basic on disses...punches was kinda soft..did'nt cause much of an impact...some lines were forced...it was iight but not good enuff for tha vote!

vote rappad