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Secrets Of War (Remix)
IP: B905 0971
Secrets If War - Beat
Tupac - Real Artist Im Just remixin it Hook: you ride wit us~or u gon die~tryin to fuck wit us/(Speedy) LiL LoCo: Niggas get crushed like its a game~ i aint in dis for da fame~ im here so niggas no my name~ it all da same~ wether u kno me~or u dun~ i aint gon concil ya~when im bout to roll on ya~ ill split ya in half for the fuck of it~ shit man my fans love it~ i come wit new sickness every spit~ i stick wit it~ (fuck yo shit) fuck my shit?~ get of dis gangsta dick~ before u learn 'da hard' way and get 'busted' by dis nut// Hook: you ride wit us~or u gon die~tryin to fuck wit us/ LiL LoCo (Me) + Speedy (First 8 lines minem rest his): Da craziest nigga on da block~ i aint gon front~u get in face u meetin da glock~ i got dis rap game on lock~ yo young ass Soldiers~think they hardcore~ my boys be boilders~cant be budged~u need to get in the yard-more(slang)~ we roll up in the lades Fifti deep~ we dun even gotta creep~we throw up L to the K and niggas gon sleep~ simple as that~whacked niggas get layed flat~ ill add anotha dimple to yo pat~ 9 bullets couldnt kill a nigga~ it musta obviouly yo first time pullin da trigga~ u ride wit me~ u aint gon colide wit me~ even if u despise me~ nobody tries to fuck wit me~ im gangsta~and i aint frontin~ u pop to learn somethin// Hook: you ride wit us~or u gon die~tryin to fuck wit us/ Last edited by Sweet Sauce : 09-30-03 at 09:39 PM. |
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IP: B905 0971
uppin
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IP: 16E4 576A
ok man that's cool...
but what kinda gangsta has time for 220 posts on an internet forum.... hmmm..... welll im sure you're real "real" so i will back off... {Peace}
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IP: B905 0971
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IP: CEF5 716F
I liked it man. Nice shit. Nice structure and all. Keep droppin. And peep my stuff too. Lataz.
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IP: B905 0971
thanks nigga
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IP: 340D 8B8F
Yeah this was a pretty good peice, good read as well, you should try to even your lines out a little bit though, but it had good flow, content was good and your vocab was alright, overall id say it was a good peice, keep dropping.
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