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10-04-03, 08:33 PM
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Skillz
IP: 5D91 8E5A
yo yo yo i'd like to dedicate this mad rhyme to my daddy and my mammy. they waz always their fo' me when i needed to be bailed out tha joint and when i didnt have any way to feed my baby cuz i sold my food stampz and bought a bag of mary j. so dis iz fo my daddy and my mammy. peace yo yo
yo yo yo. i crack you in you skull you hyped on 40's, i'm drinkin red bull sports drink, like tha gatorade yo is cheap like a made for tv movie low budget, your girls ass so ugly i wont even touch it i dark like chocolate i think i'm gonna fudge it your dirty ink i think i'm gonna smudge it kill demons with my lazer beam LOOK OUT!!!!! thingz aint whut they seem KRAFT like cheeze you is ugly skeez you never seen skillz like these oooooh. sorry record execs!!! i've already been contacted by def jux and i've promised them 2 lps..sorry peace |
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10-04-03, 08:53 PM
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IP: B20F 67F7
poor vocab, seems like your tryin to battle wit someone. work on structure a lot, keep droppin tho.
oooooh. sorry record execs!!! i've already been contacted by def jux and i've promised them 2 lps..sorry peace ^^And, wtf is up with that last thing you said? |
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10-04-03, 09:07 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 6D0E 69D5
I have to agree...with K on this...
hey man do you think your parents would enjoy this whack crap...? The only way this could be even remotely good is if you told me this was a free...but it's likely not... so... yea....ummm... well if i have to says one thing it's that you need a rhyming scheme... P.S. watch your rhymes period... "Skull/Bull" no rhyme there man... {Peace}
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