World Was Created in 6 days, imperfect/
The Seventh God Rested, Was it worth it?/
Was The Original Sin, Commited on a Saturday/
Was the Calendar Altered, To what God wants to say/



Proof, The days of Our Living in Religion and social Fear/
Our Problem is Only Ourselves, To A Court We Must Appeal/
Not Doubting God's Words, or saying The Bible's Untrue/
But Corruption in The Church, Leads we Have Little Proof/
Much of What Is Said, I still Believe In God's Words/
Realizing if You Live By The Gun, You die Bye God's Sword/
Maybe, If I Look Back and Catch A Flashback, Seeing People Die/
Sadness Plagued These Streets, Nothing Like Seeing Mothers Cry/
Babies Left without A Parent, We Droppin Our Tears./
But We Never Solve our Own Problems, We Must drop Our fears/
Society, Living in Notoriety, How Come We so Worried about Iraq/
If We Looked Upon Our Own Country's Needs, Would We worry of Attack?/

If We tried To Clean Up Our Streets, The Knowledge That We have In our Hands/
Patriotism, Propoganda, Nationalism, Deleted From Our Books, Truth in Our Lands/
7 Is Perfect, 2007 Years after The Birth of Our Lord In Human Consumption/
From The Virgin Mary, Our Mother, From her Birth To Her Assumption/
When We Our Lifted To God, Will He Wash Our Pain Away, Put Us In Purgatory/
Original Sin, And keeps Going Worse and Worse,Like Sequels and Cliffhanging Stories/
But Our Fathers and Mothers Who Were Plagued with Birth without Grace/
And Problems of Third World Countries , Whose Plagues We Can Relate/

On 2007 I Fear I Predict, The Heavens and Earth's Evil, will Part Up and Split/
Good From Bad, Bad From Worse, 7 Is Perfect, But Our Sixth Year will be Worse/

6 IS The Evil,The Devil, We all Must soon Fear, /
Jesus' Second Return,To Kill Him/
He Might Be among Us, Maybe He's Already Here/

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Only God can judge me, Who THE FUCK IS YOU?!

"World Was Created in 6 days, imperfect/
The Seventh God Rested, Was it worth it?/"

thought these opening lines were ill, but as i read on i sort of lost interest through the verses, cos it aint really my scene, but the vocab and flow was good, good to see a theme, quite original

"Society, Living in Notoriety, How Come We so Worried about Iraq/
If We Looked Upon Our Own Country's Needs, Would We worry of Attack?/"

these lines were tighter than a nuns twat...likin it

overall it was a decent drop...keep spittin dawg

Word...Looking for more Feeding...

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Only God can judge me, Who THE FUCK IS YOU?!

yeah this was a pretty good piece i thought, it made a good read, it flowed pretty well through out the piece, you had good vocab, the content was good, overall it was a good piece i thought, keep dropping.

Do you always say that Masta C????

Anyways... yea this kinda rocked... except some of the rhymes would have to tinkered.... "fear/appeal" "untrue/proof" "words/sword"
maybe you spit this with some weird accent that makes it work...or.. you never said this aloud....

{Peace}

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this was a good piece, but like ^^ the man above mee said, that part didnt rhyme, alteast to me

good shit tho

Sube Parriba Maricone

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Only God can judge me, Who THE FUCK IS YOU?!

Yea that's all he says, god damn annoying too, but ya cant stop it i guess.

As for tha drop, I liked it, i didnt like some o tha rhymes tho' but thats me i guess, I pretty much agree wit what Mag. said.

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