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Pawned Jewels (Diamond Mindz Diss)
Claiming to be wise but are fools/ Pawning these cheap crystal jewels// Naming names from Diamond Mindz/ Cuttin them up with these simplistic linez// Startin this crew massacre from head to toe/ After this they'll be the crew known as unknown// Goin for the head, killin bizzurk dead, him lookin for his crew but they fled/ Staining DM's forum red, from the bloodshed, bizzurk needing help from the med...// Bizzurk left for dead now choppin the neck/ Who's next to get wrecked? Artic q vexed// Knowing his days are numbered, knowing that after this he'll be left in an eternal slumba/ Like Jesus you'll be served like this was your last suppa// So is it ArticQlit or Orbiit? caught like a mouse/ Burnin this lyrical house, choppin artic's & orbiit's spouse// DM's chest blown away as the bullets "Ricochet"/ Oops No vest, too bad you failed this test and your left on the floor to lay// Reload'n the clip, takin a sip/ following the abc's for alpha bet// Look'n at him with respect as I turn the gun away/ listenin to audible scream as I let my tek spray// Biggie C ~ Cant see me, in this lyrical sea/ As I leave him be...Syke, as he gets a visit from my 9 mili...// Biggie C bleeding ~ Com running to his aid ~ As Biggie C begins to see Com's life begin to fade/ As I put the gun down and let Com taste the blade// Dope Words got it made as he is the mod/ Not caring as I reveal him as a fraud// I am moving at an unstoppable pace/ already winning without even starting this race// Remix N Clipse not safe/ Just giving them a sample, a taste// Of events to come/ Tu Cent Standing still ~ Stunned// Diamond Mindz has been lyrically raped/ With all of their leaders speechless, with their mouths taped// They call me the Diamond cutter/ Speeking the truth, did I stutter// Bring'n justice as a crew neutralizer/ Beating diamonds as a Miner Brutalizer// If some of your names were left out its cause I dont think your important... The only one of you's that I respect is Alpha bet Last edited by Northern Touch. : 10-05-03 at 12:28 AM. |
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IP: 6D0E 69D5
That's a big sig...
ummm.... i don't know the background behind this dis but.... yea it probably would be much better in audio... cuz it read kinda badly (structure-wise) unnh..... welll... ermmm... i think i liked it? {Peace}
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IP: 1E35 AC8A
It is better in audio its just thatmy comp has a virus that I cant seem to delete so my comp is F**** and I cant use my audio equip
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IP: 2EA7 4ABA
an okay drop, just a bit too basic..........try spicing it up a bit more
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IP: 1E35 AC8A
Uppin for constructive criticism or oppinion or admiration
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IP: DF7B C8F7
It Was Shit Like You Are Hurb . .
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IP: C1DA C961
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IP: 58B4 B459
I was only reject once first of all second as the first line said very simplistic rhymes why do I need to use complex linez when you and diamond midz are just a joke...
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IP: 9588 E886
^^lol word..
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IP: F19F D969
Well, it had a nice flow, you used good vocab, and you had a lot of punches in there. The only cons are the lack of metas and multies. But it was a good drop
if you can return the favor- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83610
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