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Just Venting On My Ex Real Quick GRR LoL
Leave me alone! Stay out of my life Leave me alone! Before I pull out the kinfe I don’t ever wanna see you again, you are now a figment of my imagination All you did was bring bad luck upon me and cause me too much frustration I’ll delete your messages, won’t answer the phone, and just ignore you Everything I did was for you its too bad it has 2 End this way ,I use to adore you You did too much damage and I’m trying to restore everything you busted Your words are lies, your words are nothing, B*S you don’t deserve to be trusted I can’t say I hate you but I don’t love you that’s for certain We put on a show when fighting but its time to close the curtain I’m sick of fighting, don’t wanna hear your voice But you wont leave me alone so I’m left with no choice Leave me alone! Stay out of my life Leave me alone! Before I pull out the knife
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IP: 3051 A36A
I’ll delete your messages, won’t answer the phone, and just ignore you
Everything I did was for you its too bad it has 2 End this way ,I use to adore you I can’t say I hate you but I don’t love you that’s for certain We put on a show when fighting but its time to close the curtain ^^^^^^fave lines but without seeming rude i think maybe u shud have words the last line of this..... Everything I did was for you its too bad it has 2 End this way ,I use to adore you but this was nice you got the pure feeling of this and people can easily relate so nice stuff peace |
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IP: 8F25 FB35
Quote:
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^^^^Favorite lines This was deep,i can tell you put a lot of emotion into this piece.Keep it up. Overall:8/10 One |
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IP: 8F50 A7E0
Thank u Peoplez!
Yay! Anymore feedback?
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Banned 4 biting
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IP: 8F25 FB35
Man she hates me
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GÄÑg§tå Gu®£
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IP: 8F50 A7E0
Jeff Ur Like a Lil Bro This Aint About U Wtf LoL ...
ANYWAYZ back to topic!
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
It's all love Yana
Your getting slept on.Don't worry happens to me too |
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GÄÑg§tå Gu®£
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IP: 4E5E 91ED
Pfft dont ya hate it?
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GÄÑg§tå Gu®£
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IP: 98B7 00B1
That Sucks How Like No1 Leaves Feedback.. But Oh Well W.e
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Light Weight
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IP: 8F3D D150
Nice Emotional Piece.. Felt it Thro Out..The Bars i Liked were already Qouted..I d Leave ya some Feedback But it was Flawless...
Would ya Stab Him>? Stay Up n Keep Droppin
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GÄÑg§tå Gu®£
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IP: 98B7 00B1
If Killing Was Not A Sin I Would Stab Him... But Lucky For Him Im A Religious Person
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IP: 8F3D D150
Hah..U in Tha Choir Too?...
If hes in Ott..Whats His Name ?
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GÄÑg§tå Gu®£
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IP: 8F50 A7E0
I Actually Was In The Choir.... Stop Askin 4 Names And Freepostin.. Ur Never Gonna Meet Me
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IP: E655 47CD
that was really really good. your a talented and i like the way you flowed with it. really nice piece
hit this up w/ an honest vote if you could too thanx. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86737 |
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IP: 96FF 1751
real life shit, ill piece, good structure, deeply emotional, good rhyme scheme, kinda short, you couldve elaborated a bit more, and i thought it ended to abruptly, other than that i liked this piece, keep ya head up boo.~1~
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