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10-12-03, 05:37 PM
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take a look at this
IP: B89D 4D65
yo key style
when i pick up the mike, peeps are so shocked they hyperventilatin/ they think how can this cat be blessed with skillz, with no.. elevatin/ an wen i ryhme...... i try to refrain from mentionin names/ i spit flames... but i still manage to be lost up in this game/ were newbies get no votes, an most vets shit is pre-wrote/ its bit of other websites. usaually word by word, each ill quote/ but most of us accept it an let our battles be hated on/ all the mods on tihs site, cause shit, get mass-debated on/ that it a short lil keystyle gimme sum feedback y'all |
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10-12-03, 05:45 PM
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Banned for being stupid
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IP: 95C5 EAD6
for a newb that wasnt that bad......next time i suggest tryin to make it a little longer, ur vocab and wordplay was pretty good, try and include some more multis though, and try and pick a not so played on topic, other than it was pretty good, keep postin dude, u got potential.
peace...... |
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10-12-03, 05:50 PM
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BANNED - LOSER
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
that was a good flow.....
just keep postin and workin on making your flows longer..... <~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~> |
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10-12-03, 05:51 PM
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IP: B89D 4D65
aiight thanks for that gotlove an drummer , i'ma keep droppin till in kno im good enough to battel,
but if any1 wants to vote honestly on this, wateva vote the cat is for, it will be appreciated http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84826 |
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10-12-03, 06:06 PM
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BANNED - LOSER
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
i battled right off the bat but i lost.
i lost cuz i didnt have good anything. but you could win if you tried <~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~> |
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10-12-03, 06:21 PM
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IP: B89D 4D65
i wasnt syain anythin about your battle record, iwas jus sayin i'm goin to keep postin in open mic till i feel ready to battle wit peeps
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10-12-03, 06:49 PM
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IP: B89D 4D65
uppin 4 more feedback
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10-13-03, 12:56 AM
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BANNED - LOSER
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
i think you can battle...
and win just challenge someone (not me) <~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~> |
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10-13-03, 03:01 AM
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IP: 9EBD 5113
it was straight dog
not to much excitement keep postin though
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MAC4LIFE, M.multis A.authority C.commitment,MFL Pacaso mac the Baskin Robbins Street(hustla tryin to scoop up this ice and cream) |
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10-13-03, 06:53 PM
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IP: B89D 4D65
uppin for more feedback................
please y'all give a fair vote ont this battle if ya hav time http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85357 |
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10-13-03, 07:09 PM
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BANNED
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IP: 400A 42AA
yeah for a newb yo shit was pretty tight but u still need some elevatin and shit wit ur vocab and flows and all well peace
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10-13-03, 08:20 PM
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Feedback
IP: C4E0 8FF4
Flow was there just was a short piece could of made it longer
best line in this was prolly: "an wen i ryhme...... i try to refrain from mentionin names/ i spit flames... but i still manage to be lost up in this game/" keep postin and plz return the favor of feedback  Return the favor and drop feedback on this plz
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