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Old 10-13-03, 09:32 AM   #1
brainsurgeon
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pissed at arrogant wack lyricists

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fuck the lying babies it's becuz of the love i innovate to make my rhyming crazy
but what's the point, i visited a site where all the wacks conspired against me
with sickly keystyles the brainsurgeon proceeded to spit wild
choked a swimmer to show those jokers the meaning of "murderous freestyle"!!
except faggots couldn't read-rhyme, even when i dropped to mutilate
now i seriously think there're wack niggaz who would bitch, rather than elevate!
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Old 10-13-03, 09:38 AM   #2
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man... incredibly short but wasnt too bad.. the vocab was aite.. the multis were nice and the structure is nice. and definitly sent a message... but it seems to be meant to be short..nonethelesss it was a short sweet peice keep elevatin, one.
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Old 10-13-03, 11:41 AM   #3
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short and sweet..........nice!
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Old 10-13-03, 01:31 PM   #4
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^^^straight wordness.....i thought it was kinda short, but it was to the point which made for a pretty good read, ur vocab was lackin a little, but ur wordplay and content was pretty good, u had a pretty original topic, overall id say it was a pretty good drop, keep postin homie, that was nice.

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Old 10-13-03, 03:04 PM   #5
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yeah pretty tight sometimes the length doesnt matta jus al long as u get ur word across and its ill and shit
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