Dear: jessie
You know u ma sexyness girl.....
nuthin but love goin to ya direction..
Just thought i'd take a break from issues an tell you how i'm feelin..
This for you girl....
Ma "One(+)Love"

................::::::::::One(+)Love:::::::::::::: :...........

[[Verse 1]]
[['Speach..Satisfies' my eyes gratified ta see ya lines defy locations reach to 'Breach..This-Shattered-Mind']]
[[Speakin'..Scattered-Crimes' of hearts every time words exchange i'm left 'Creepin'..With-Infactuated..Strides']]
[['Dreamin'..While..Matters..Bind' mental pictures fire my feelings hights of
'Passion's' baby you 'Gotta..Be..Mine']]
[['I'm..Deteriorating' this shits infuriating, why cant you be in my arms satisfy-ing,thaz juss 'Life,..Here-We-Are-Waiting']]
With
[['Spines..Filled..With-Antisipactieen' tingling with statements touchin the souls center
'Lines..Wear..Emotieens..Are..Bleeding']]
[['Piles..Of..Feelings' im revealing, i'm spilling to ya mental so when you sleep its
'My..Smiles..Your..Seeing']]
[['Romancing..Cerebrals' threw letters your letting-me-know juss how you truely are
'Stancing..This-Continuis-Issue']]
of
[['Locations..Conflict-Between-Blooms' of loves moves, you dont understand the lengths i'm 'Taking..To-Some-Day-Be-With-You']]
[['Grasped..Bear' you lay right there next to me able to hear sweet wispers
'Passed..Threw-Ya-Ear']]
This goes
[['Be-ond..Sexual-Dwellings' this some true shit i'm dealin, neelin on my nees beggin
'Please-For-God's..Intelectual-Being']]
To step
[[Along..A-Love-Complexly-Fuled..Greeving' and heel my beating heart instead of
'Wrong-ing..A-Quest-For-Pure..Feelings']]

[[Chorus]]
[[All my words are for you]]
[[Take a break from drugs and criminal views,]]
[[Let your lights shine threw, heal and brighten this disturbs minds tune]]
[[And you should know baby,]]
[[I'd only do somethin like this for a woman holdin my one love....like you]]

[[Verse 2]]
[['Jersey..Angel' blessin the streets,while she enables a pure glow to break
'Ev-ery..Lable']]
[['Surely..A-Fable' is what my mind is thinkin while its ticken to the beat of you hearts
'Serenidy..Against-One-Unstable']]
[['Identities..Forgotten',i'm rotten in prissen my mind state is holdin back your every
'Entities..Problems']]
[['Felonies..Unimportent' when i'm sportin you legs around my abdomin, grabin them
'Beautifly-Crafted..Lips-Supports-Till-End']]
Baby I'd spend all
[['Eternity..On-Lock' if it ment you out the spot i'll serve 25 to life,for you i'd feed
'Athorities..A-Glock']]
[['Shore-ly..My-Slot' will be filled to the top with dirt, i'll wach the last breath get
'Abruply..Robbed']]
In my head is
[['Only..One-Lil-Thought' and thats the haunting caugh of lonlyness, life without u,a
'Dynasty..Aloft']]
From
[['My-Baby..Im-Distraught' i've faught to show how i really feel and couldn't handle a
'Cemetary..Wen-I-Know-Wut-Ive-Lost']]
[['A-Spiritual..Blessin' baby you on my side next to me neckin, i'm strechin for you this
'Lyrical..Caressin']]
Now ima throw
[['Numerical..Presition' 23 lines of a man, a mission, and his goal to show you
'Unbearable..Submissions']]
Of often
[['Unhearable..Wishs' baby for you i'd do, with a smile hugs, kisses and
'Undeniable..Feelins']]

[[Chorus]]
[[All my words are for you]]
[[Take a break from drugs and criminal views,]]
[[Let your lights shine threw, heal and brighten this disturbs minds tune]]
[[And you should know baby,]]
[[I'd only do somethin like this for a woman holdin my one love....like you]]

Dam....
u peoples got ya eyes wide shut on my shit........
dont know wut i gota do ta get sum feedback......
cuz i know yawl seein this

I DONT LIKE THE FORMAT BUT CONTENT MEANING AND ALL ASPECTS THE I USE TO CRITQUE WERE FOUND HERE VERY AGRESSIVE YET EMOTIONAL PIECE.....
ID EASILY GIV THI 10/10 INDEED POP STAY UP AND DO YOUR THING...
P.S.
IF YOU INTERESTED OMENS ARE CURRENTLY RECRUITING SEARCHING FOR FAMILY MEMBERS WITH YOUR TALENT

very nice piece.............the layout was crazy but it was all good.......the piece was endless talent........mad props to ya...keep it up

ayo WORD......
i could very possibly be interested in that offer.....
Can u PM me wit so info on who i gota talk to......
an ur active roster so i can check the cats u got reppin.....
holla mayn .....
n thanx fo ya feedback

up..

^Word

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