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10-28-03, 12:40 PM | #1 | |||||||
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I Shot Ya (diss is ridiculous)
IP: E4B8 E879
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dis shyt is hot to def....feedback plz i just learned about cool edit and made a banger...shyt, dis can go fo a legend. HOLLA |
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10-28-03, 01:18 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 9085 E706
Please....rhyme on beat at least....talk about whatever...but rhyme on beat...
NEVER again use a big verse 1
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10-28-03, 06:20 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 9E18 D314
Lyrics was dope, n i felt ya tone/emotion...could be on the hits a bit more but I thought it was aight. chorus wasn't anything special, but could be cus the beat don't change through it.
for u'r second beat tho i though ya have real potential. u want custom beats for no charge hit me up. Phate2148 pc
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10-29-03, 07:51 AM | #4 | ||||
\/ pissing me off!!!!
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IP: B89D 4D65
nice drop, i like this beat it sound good wit most cas on it,
it could make justin timberlake, sound grimy..... nice lyrics, though, i like the delivery. nice drop. pz .. .:::.
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10-29-03, 09:22 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: EDFE F352
"I'm just the boy that u went down on/
and ya sluts gotta pay me da fuck from now on//" damn son that whole bar came straight from a cassidy freestyle. plus u was spittin off beat. |
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10-30-03, 08:17 PM | #6 | |||||||||
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IP: A37E 9D4C
My only advice other than stop biting, and learn how to rap is...
Never hype up your track like that in a thread.. when i see that, im expecting THE best.. and im always disapointed... but yeah.. learn how to flow on beat.. the beat is dope but you ruined it... fuckin biter
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10-30-03, 11:27 PM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: 20B7 B184
too bad you banned dog, I was feelin' this man. THEY don't be feelin this shit dog, yeah you coulda been mor on the the beat but it's mix tape quality doe
PS I never heard of cassidy...so he's nobody. |
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10-31-03, 10:41 AM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 06EF 4E9D
you're not flowin to the beat
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10-31-03, 02:11 PM | #9 | ||||||
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IP: 3DB3 F4C0
Shit was wack.
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