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10-31-03, 08:38 PM | #1 | |
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verbs vs. syted
IP: E8A7 1907
I'll just use the same rules from your other post with the ausrotten guy:
10 lines no hate/crew votes no feeding due a.s.a.p. ya' dig...... this is my check in too. |
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10-31-03, 08:41 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 318D F487
Aiight I'm Here...I'm Writin Right Now....
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10-31-03, 08:51 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 318D F487
The ~Best? Your Not~ Couldn't Have 'God Writes' If I ~Blessed Your Font~ I'll 'Cook And Serve' Your Uncles Wife And ~REST-UR-AUNT- (restauraunt)
I'll Slice You Open And ~Bleed You~ Your Important?? Take Ya Face To My Knee Is The Only Time Anyone Has Ever "~Kneeded You~" (Kneed-Need) My Words Will Tense Up Your Muscles So It ~Holds ya Breath~ Write 'Dead' On My Outfit And Even Then You Still Couldn't Get Me ~Clothes To Death~ (Clothes-Close) Battlin' Pus8ys Like You Then I'll ~Win A Few~ I Got Bullets That Remind Me Of Fablous Cause They'll Love To Be So ~Into You~ This Dudes The Type To ~Stare At A Thin Fag~ I'll Beat You Red N' Blue And Leave You So Pale, Lookin' Like A Dismentaled ~American Flag~ |
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10-31-03, 09:30 PM | #4 | |
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IP: E8A7 1907
your name is oversyted, wackness couldn't reach me, I cloud your iris/
your naked verses scream for closure(clothes), so I do the impossible, like Iraqi's silence/ must be double-vision? seeing no potential but potential minus, the plastic virus/ shutsdown syteds immune record(0-0), from what seems two zeros to a closed eyelid(0-1)/ resentul defiance, forcefully pilling rhyming, his punches play hero, til' I kill his sidekick/ murdered in front of the whole RB, I'm the inventor of distracting violence/ quick to step up and lose? must be fast with kindness/ strike a match a behind him....I'll probably flame it/ this fag is burning, throw punches? like his potty training never learned to aim it/ ya' rhymes is still all buttcheek, even if you took time to write it cause your an anus/ |
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10-31-03, 09:35 PM | #5 | |
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IP: E8A7 1907
***correction**
sorry the immune line was supposed to say "see-thru" instead of "immune", my bad. I see that syted had a "clothes" line too, trust me I didn't feed or bite it's merely coincedence, I just noticed it. |
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11-01-03, 01:13 PM | #6 | |
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IP: 318D F487
Uppin This Shit...LEts Get Sum Votes In Here....I Don't Want This To Be On The 2nd Page And This To Get Over Wit....UPPIN!!!
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11-01-03, 01:22 PM | #7 | |
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IP: C1DA C961
umm sy some of your puches jus dident make too much sense??
the one wit the Aunt was horribal....... verbs i wasent feelin your verse either... had some good wordplay.. but room for improvemnt.. youll need to put thought to your punches... but good battle.. evenly matched.. vote: Sy keep elavating |
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11-01-03, 01:23 PM | #8 | |
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IP: 399E F0FD
vote- syted..
punches were easier to grasp... the other kids a few were played, wellk a few for [both were.. but.. syteds punches hit harder and were a little easier to read. syted.. switch to a style without all the !~~~~ its gay as fuck. |
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11-01-03, 01:24 PM | #9 | |
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IP: 399E F0FD
meh- what the fuck.. i just realized theres no poll = closed.@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@
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