12 lines Maxed
Spit By Tonight
We're both Vets, But I set it here so It dont get Slepped

This Better be An ILL battle Toke



Check In, and Drop an honest vote on Me VS Deva


Thanks bro

Roc Ya Body Mic Check One, Two

14 Lines Max... Like In The Bitch Slap Thread...

lol i changed my mind

__________________
Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

My Callout dude So 12 lines maxed
Note: Check For personals, Their All True

I Needed Some Elivation, But I Couldn't Aquire It from You
Therefor If Ya Location was True......I wouldn't of Left Ur Crew
U Still Havent Spit Yet? Read the Rules The Clocks Been Wound
Check His Pro for the Occupation, A Question when Given Rounds
You'd Think you were a Slut They Way I'll Ruin Ur Reputation
This Kid Is Just a fruit, A Sex Educational Presentation (Condom on Bananna)
Putting you to the Test, I'm Spitting Raid To remove this Pest
If Tokens better than Me, Why'd I Get Matched with DM's Best?
(Feeble-Diomonds)
Tokens Broken more Newbies than Jesus feedin Crowds wit Bread
On A Level Herbs Cant Comprehend, I thought thats what U Said?
Its True that Records dont Count, It Matters Who You Beat
So If Toke Lived Up to His..........Would he be Repping H.I.V?

Spit When U see this
I wont DQ U if you dont get around tonight

*Shakes Head*... Played Out Punches...

Now For Your 3rd Loss... *Drum Roll Please*



^ Now Would You Please Excuse Me, While I Get Straight To The Facts
I Dont Even Need To Throw Punches He Said It All In Bitch Slapped (Check Above)
Settin Himself Up For His 3rd Loss... I'm A Thorn In His Side
Knowing His Herb Tactics Will Prevail... His Lines Are Suicide
My Verse Is Like Diseased Germs Infecting Your Brain Like African Lice
You Got A Crown Of Thorns As Your Avy... What, You Think You're Christ?
Only Considered Holy After People Read Your Verse And Say Oh God
Once The Mods Close This... You'll Be Thankin RB Like G.Hod (G.Hod's Custom Title Is Thanks, RB)
^ Oh It's True... <--- Only Thing That Was Honest In Your Post
Your Record Is Covering Up Your Wackness, Like Butter On Burnt Toast
I Let You In H.I.V. Thinkin Maybe I'll Create A Newbie Sub Forum
You Didn't Murder 23 Emcees... Those Kids Read Your Verse And Died Of Boredom

__________________
Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

L A T E ' D

What......thorn

Man My verse didnt have Punches They Had all Personals


Did you read My verse?


Votes

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Nice Guys...
Wanted Ta Give Feedback To Friends...

Remix- Beautiful Punches...
Punches Were Just Outstanding...
Flow Was On Target...
Work On Stronger Personals And More Metas...
Overall, Great Verse...
Good Luck...

Thorn- Great Personals...
Flow Was Pretty Good...
Multi.s Could Have Been Better...
Wordplay...
Overall, Nice Drop...

May The Best Man Win...

sweet battle but Thorn gets his 3rd loss his lack of punches really really really hurt him this time
[b]BREAKDOWN[B/]
opener- token....both good but token's had more heat
closer-token...not great lyrically but nice personal punch combo
punches-token
personals-thorn...homie personals are more effective with punches
creativity-thorn hands down
wordplay-tie
originality-thorn
vocab-tie
overal-very very close battle this is grounds for a rematch...but on this day token had the overal better verse

Tokens best Line was The Christ one lol

Nice


But dont compare ya self wit me with Personals

Up

^^^DAmn good ass battel
foreal............u both got talent..
sum hard skillz

TOken took this in my eyes
Close battle very even until that last line
that did it for me..foreal remix remixed it up Lmao...damn that last line....lol

v- token...Thorn no hate kid u came hard but hmm wasnt feelin everything
Token had a solid verse

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89622

^^theres sum heat ..THorn U want next

No

Im slowin my pace down


i battle 6 times a Week, Runnin outa shit, My verses are gettin weaker and weaker


This will be my last for a While

Lol
yea u had like 26 battle spit on in like a week of time that was Liek whoaa...
but u got skill
id liek to revoke my vote actually i think Thorn took it
sum better personals
Still clsoe as fuk

V-THORn


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89622

^^^^ hit it up Honestly see real HEat

yo that was tight on both sides hard shit to judge but token i think had more punches. damn real good personal hits at the end...much props to both

can ya vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...light=executive

good one

opener-token
closer-token
punches-token
personals-Thorn
enjoyment-token
originality-tie
creativity-tie
multi's-Thorn
overall-Token.......


no hate ....good verses by both.........


tokenn......can u hit this up with an honest vote?thanx


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89622