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Old 11-04-03, 03:31 PM   #1
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[Dreading Doubts]

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Only imperfections were my reception into this world
The autumn leaves makes me no exception to be frail
Reflections gone pale from holding the burning tears
That weep from ear to ear that makes my skin smear
Smiles you see isn't here inside where I feel deprived
I'm so screwed I can't even start to reveal & describe
What I shield & hide inside but i'll try like I normally do
Lifes horribly viewed through sharp eyes, yet so blunt
People keep pushing my potential but get cold shunts
Did my childhood involve mumps, cuz I seem impotent
No matter what you do,You can't redeem involvement
I fiended solvements but I ain't very proud to admit it
Angrilly I matured into a man through all this hardship
Maybe adolescence hasn't departed?I still have angst
But when I have writers block I actually feel the blanks
Feeling refelctions of my life & objection to whats right
Theres no exception of my hype,I've come from nothing
Others see this sooo scary that they run when bluffing
Or do they run from something thats strangly mutated
But I have older cats about me being lamely duplicated

Am I confusing or refusing the truth. .
Am I a half herb cuz I cut my routes. .
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Old 11-04-03, 03:52 PM   #2
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Old 11-04-03, 03:58 PM   #3
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This Was Great Kid..
Ya Lines matched Perfectly, Which Sum People
Dont Realize Isn't Easy To Do..
Depthe Was Clean, And Great Meaning.
Nice Vocab.. Deff. Elevating.. Good Read

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Old 11-04-03, 05:13 PM   #4
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Thanx.
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Old 11-04-03, 05:25 PM   #5
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Gr8 peice man, like Auspicious sed, its hard to make ur lines equal, but jus cus u got equal lines dont mean ya flow is gr8. However you flowed well in this.

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Or do they run from something thats strangly mutated
But I have older cats about me being lamely duplicated


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Old 11-04-03, 05:42 PM   #6
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Potent.. this was a dope piece man. As I say in every reply, the flow makes the piece, and the flow in this was mos definately on point, which made the read so damn good. Shit was smooth. Vocab was on up there cuz, I like that. Multi's were present, and ya lines were matched.. and the fact that it's difficult to get them to match and flow well too.. and you did it... makes this drop even better.

Maybe adolescence hasn't departed?I still have angst
But when I have writers block I actually feel the blanks
^^ Word to that. I have over 50 tracks written out, ready to record, so writers block for me is more prevelant now.

Keep droppin man, this was def. ill.

-Formula.

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