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New Open Mic
IP: E8C0 DC72
Im bored in 4th period and just typin sum shit up...
::keystyle:: Lyrical Soldiers come and fuck up ya crew D.S. representin... aint nothin new.... Nu Lecture... U need sum1 to protect'cha Cause tha lyrics I spit is more than a fuckin lect'cha I aint even focused cause of tha fuckin noise But I still come and murder u and ur fuckin boyz Im Sick Wit It Quik Wit It Ima straight up spit it But if u test me, I'll make ya quit this rap shit This aint even my fuckin serious spittin Sounds like sumthin-Touch-My-Buffdoo had ghostwritten Talk about tha structure cause i know its all jacked But talk about tha soldiers, ur gonna get whacked Fuck a whack U'll get merked in serious work I'll have u workin on tha E channel wit Brooke Burke Lil Crane went insane in his lil fuckin brain And Mack_Milli can cry about his fuckin pain Whitrap is crap when it comes to flows He has no job, he's lame, and gets no hoes If a nigga wanna jock sumthin, jock a glock But make sure that ur woman dont rock my cock Spit4One went to Spittin 4 none... Spit son... o thats it?... fuck it man ur done I'll leave a nigga wet up wit his whole damn crew Do u know how many niggaz this shell will go through? Didnt think so... Lyrical Soldiers... Livin up our name We on sum serious shit as we runnin tha game While M.B.P. still reppin for tha crew he ride for P-Verse is reppin for tha whore that a bitch dies for... Dont take this as a diss, take it as ur fuckin lesson As I send u niggaz to god witout a fuckin blessin... LiL Phokus can focus on a lyrical ass whippin Actin like a thug wit apple juice he be sippin If I can change tha way u do things, Id make u like him Cause I dont need a follower... a.k.a. a sim Be urself and dont respond back to this spit Cause I piss on ur bars of ur fuckin bullshit... Uppin for tha feedback on this piece... i know its kinda stupid but i was bored and needed sumthin to write. Peace. |
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Light Weight
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IP: 6308 3348
I like the wordplay, but it seemed simple.. Anyways, i guess u have some shit witin you, or u wudn't have "middleweight" as a title. Peace homie.. (not hating)
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IP: CC07 EC19
First of all, being a middle-weight doesnt mean anything. titles mean crap......
Personally I think this is a pretty shitty post. No structure, no flow no multis punches etc. Nuttin I can really quote. You'll elevate in time, keep ya head up. |
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one wink
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IP: B691 B3C4
Your replies to others?
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Middle Weight
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IP: C1DA C961
i was really bored at tha moment. plus i was in class so i had to do sum quik shit. so yea. thanx for tha replies. uppin for more feedback.
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one wink
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IP: 17A6 BC21
Fuck you, ignore my post. I didn't even have to ask you, I could have deleted it.
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