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IP: C1DA C961
Please believe Im da hottest on the block/
niggas never tellin me to stop/ my standards never drop/ and i dont get down wit suckin on da cock/ makin niggas sick, temperature over a 100 degrees/ mami so hot niggas be beggin on the knees/ wrap it tight, want pleasure not a disease/ for dogs who like it raw, back up nigga please/ dem bitches try to test me/ but im harder than the SAT/ im a real ass chick/ niggas pay me just for touchin on da dick/ got dollas dat buy Gucci kicks/ wear skirts dat fit da hips/ i make sure i drive the hottest whip/ you might can rock a boat/ but can u rock a ship? |
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IP: 3F54 40C7
Precious Vixen, You as boring as richard nixon, You should listen do this shit dat im spittin, little bitch now listen,
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IP: BB8C D4B2
um, elevate should be ur primary objective, use wordplay, complexity, vocabulary, metaphors, multi's...
but it did flow, props on that...
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IP: 32D9 0BD3
1 Word..Elevate..you need to use more word choice and wordplay..all of this will come with time..just work on it a little..peace
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