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You ain't dominating shit, submissive bitch, ya can't fight...
Lyrical Soldier, but here's a switch, he's the one on the right. (his sig pic)
Scared in battle, so he fucked up twice makin this thread...
He thinks he's armed with wits but it seems he's been misled.
Ya gettin captured and fucked, soldier, call you Jessica Lynch...
I'd show ya my dick but ya used to em and wouldn't even flinch.
Cuz ya gay in a way that leaves straight dudes dismayed...
Lookin ta find true love, so you can one day throw the bouquet.
Ya 'fight a war against all', yes...that many people hate you...
Cuz ya rhymes suck and wouldn't catch on even if ya spat crazy glue.

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Explanation- He's a 34 year old from Texas who thinks he is a rapper.... That sum's in up... im'a put him in his place now


There is no doubt in my mind that you were Born to Kill
But you were born in 1969 - Your almost OVER THE HILL
Theres no rappers in Texas! "Houston.. We have a Problem"
Even NASA knows thats wack - and your not far from them
And just cuz you have 1800 post dont make you a true Vet
Your rhymes leave ya too broke 4 weed so ya smoke cigarettes
My lyrics will singe your arteries n leave ya head on a post [like his avvy]
I own you, ill piss on your dead body - and then your ghost
Your a 34 year old from Texas - what'cha doin bat'lin on RB
About to become the next Emcee scrollin in my marquee

uppin for Domination............
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nice battle from u both i gotta say....u both had good personals...but i think Born had better ones....most of Dom's personals have been used many a times...lol...but i won't hold that against u really....but Born did have harder punches....and Dom had more wordplay...but with old concepts...here's the line i think that killed it all....

even though i had to go back and look at his sig...that shit made me laugh...lmao...nice line yo....here's a breakdown for u two...

BREAKDOWN
Vocab - Tie
Flow - Tie
Punches - Born
Personals - Born (more original)
Wordplay - Dom (just alot)
Metas - Dom (same as above)
RhymeScheme - Tie
Creativity - Born
Complexity - Tie

Born To Kill - 3 out of 9
Dominator - 2 out of 9
Tie - 4 out of 9

Overall - i gotta say Born took this mostly because his verse had more originality to it...and funny personals....i've already seen the ones Dom used plenty of times....so they don't have as much of an effect....nice read from u both though...no hate...just a vote...

peace
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Using my first uppin...

Drop ya votes and links...

You know the deal...

So do I...

Vote up!

Peace

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honest shit

flow-tie
metas-no good ones
punches-Dom
vocab-born
finisher-tie
personals-Dom

It was close but Dominator got this one wit the personals........

return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90916

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born get his one and heres why

wordplay=born
flow=tie
creativity=born...Dom the wheres Houston..and his age has been played too many times...
personals=born
structure=tie
metas=tie,didnt see many form either
punches=born
poll vote=born


closer than it looks...Dom lost cus of played rhymes..people always use those personals against...therefore born basically won becuz of creativity...and consistency

need hoest votes here guys thanx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91144

yo ait battle but played personals by dom

punches-dom
personals-b2k
wordplay-b2k
vocab-b2k
overall-b2k

age shit was too played...no hate

please hit this up honestly

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91151

thanks

yo nyce battle yall heres my breakdown!!!!!

Flow-B2K
Punchs-Dom
Personals-B2K
Volcab-B2K

Overall-Born To Kill

Aiigh B2k Took this 1 to day nyce battle thought Peace (v)

opener-Born
closer-dom
punches-dom
personals-Born---good thing i didnt mention ya age...played
originality-born
multis-born
enjoyment-born---multis got it for me
complexity-tie
overall-b2k



no hate at all

please vote here...if dude responds


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91011