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Old 11-26-03, 09:48 PM   #1
Defend
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Want to be free

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Niggas can't hate me cause i want'a be free/
I was trap up in this hell abou't 100 degress/
I don't agree to all the charges that these haters brought against me/
Too much dow too much clothes but the coc I jusy don't know/
Strap everyday and everynight turn on the lights/
When i get on the stage usually i'm rocking the mic/
In the drought season a nigga would starve my weed ain't growing/
so i result to violent measures sprayin my gang on the wall/
Just a sign for telling niggas don't you come around here/
If you wan't to see your mom listen up and dissapear/
My goods my little secret always stash in the car/
Under the hood talking bou't my coc so i guess i did lie/
No time for playing games nigga time is money/
I learn that age 5 selling candy like the chocolate bunny/
Reasons for the dumbings tell me if you find out/
Till then i'll be making money, driving a lexus, playing the xbox/
Time to talk if you go against the team/
Tie you up in the chair and soak you up in gasoline/
Watch you burn in flames i frame one of my foes/
Talking bou't you was here and there they ain't what the report say so/
So you off to jail i'm off the hook this could be one good book/
But until the day i die i'll be making money fuck that other shit/
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Old 11-26-03, 09:52 PM   #2
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not bad at all im not feeling the topic but you have the talent to get peoples attention.
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Old 11-26-03, 10:14 PM   #3
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Flow Fell Off In Some Places, As Did Ya Rhymes. Some Of Your Bars Didn't Rhyme, Add That To The Some What Choppy Flow, And Those Are The Negatives. I Did See Some Positive Tho, You Got Some Talent. Multi's Were Good When Used, Vocab Was OK, You Can Up If You Wish. . Ain't Really No Big Deal Tho, Vocabulary Don't Make The Piece, Content And Flow Does. Speakin Of Content, You Was Lackin A Bit. I Wasn't Really Feelin The Piece As A Whole, But I'll Be Lookin Out For More Drops To See You Elevate Aight.

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