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11-26-03, 07:14 PM
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Not ya Average
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me............peep game
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I’m the AirBorn Virus, last shit you hear after Plane Crashes
Me status spreads vast across the atlas a Flame Rapper Fucks fame, hear Dark from London to the underground Road Of thunder, me mates call me a God, I boasts of Zeus Mold My fuse is set to blow, call in yee Marshals it’sa Fire Hazard Cuz my entire matter is like Jet Fuel mixed w/Pryos &Lacquer Nitro prolific Master, powerful enough to hold ten Lions On one shoulder &Tame four with a whip casted in Iron The lot of my topics are dragstic warning sirens me Mates Pre-Warned of tha Tyrant that Rapes the pussies of Thee fakes Elevate off beef like Tree Snakes hunting their prey I got something to say, and it’s fuck your ranting your gay Go fuck off and live out dreams with your Bi Sexual Life Partner I’m Cumming for your Asses, it’s Tha Flexible Strife Martyr Making life harder with an erect Javelin throughout your corridor Fuck writtens, I keystyle more and more, envy this..sign Your Ill-usions
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11-26-03, 07:37 PM
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Not ya Average
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IP: 0EF2 87A5
uppin for feedback
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11-26-03, 07:41 PM
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..Soft Focus..
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IP: 1B3B C284
not a bad piece, actually pretty good i liked it, good flow had some okie vocab. keep it comen man...pz
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11-26-03, 07:48 PM
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A King Missing a Queen...
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IP: 8D7B 43DF
I thought it was Ok. But the shit talken verses dont apeal to people anymore hommie. Not unless there extremely good. I say get a better topic, and you would be straight. Be sure to got peep my flow Im about to post up. Aight Out
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11-27-03, 03:00 AM
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IP: 63D7 39EF
This was ok man.....You structured it pretty well i thought good job on that....the flow of it was pretty well also, stayed on point most of the time i thought....You had some good vocab, nothing wrong there...overall this was pretty good..keep at it and keep dropping.
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