http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...2017#post942017
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...2023#post942023
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...2031#post942031


[Deva]
Guess what I’m talking bout, it would be a dull place
People be walking round with miserable looks on their face
It’d be a case of listening to the sounds of natural things
Like the birds singing, the wind cos that’d be our strings
Rigid limbs would be plentiful no movement in our shins
There’d be no nightclubs for brov’s to dance drink n binge
Cos I cringe to think bout a world so fucked up n outta luck
That sorta ruck, could split minds and influentially corrupt
If ya deduct from the equation ya squash a whole generation
From expressing their thoughts through there own vocation
Its reck-reation without it dawg’s would bark at each other
Tension building without release, beef’n brother to brother
Blow my cover, smother, anything im prepared to lose it
But for fucks sake, don’t lay a finger on ma god damn music

If there weren’t no music what would we do
If there weren’t no music would we still run true
If there weren’t no music would there be me or you
Running beats, or would there be sumthin new?

[Gene]
hit start on the get down, let’s make this shit call out/ to all the girls, boys, and bro’s sittin in the lock down/
just shunned out, in the moment u get gunned out/
punned, and spun, when u get on the bounce/
but what if? u wonder, what it would be like/
if there weren’t no music today, left astray/
sane in a day, but insane in other ways that can’t be explained/
left awake, insomniac comes quick to take in, suicide a sin?/
Where the only place it can be felt is deep down within/
all because u have no music to warp your brain/
slowly stripping away, the memories of everyday/
the feelings you felt, when u were down with this rap game/
so u turn to killing the pain, by gunnin down everyone that gets in your way/
cuz this is what it would be like, if there were no music to survive in this day/

Deva
8/10

Gene
8.2/10

you guys both did excellent, this was a very nice piece, definitly werth the read. keep postin, i love this doubles shit.

This was nice
Deva had sum good vocab
iight multis
Gene verse was iight but I liked Deva's betta
keep droppin!

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Yeah i agree this was a good collab guys.....Both of you had pretty good structure just Genes first line is stretched but i think thats just a typo error there lol...But both had some pretty good vocab as well....It was worth the read...sorry i couldnt collab with you guys on this one, would have been great...overall this was a good collab guys.

Not bad, topic was a bit played out but you didn't do bad for such a played out topic. Flow was on for the most part, multis were there on both sides. Overall a decent drop, stay up.

Reply to Me and G.Hods Collab...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2694#post942694

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that was a Nyce Collab......it wasn't the best collab i have seen.....but it was a good one....about 8/10 for that Open Mic.


Aiight Peace Out Kuz

thnx dawgs.......appreciated and noted...lol...............Pz

Elvis would be jealous!!!!!!!......not really, but that was ill......representin well with that collab


8.5/10......Bladow

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both came sicc but i gotta give it 2 deva
he got me bobbin mah head while i was readin
good rhyme structure dogg

only weak point was da chorus
kinda simple

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thnx man.......any more........Pz

yea to answer ur question their masta the first line was a typo the next line was sposed to start after the part where it says "call out" but anyways thanx for the feedback ppl. keep it comin. thanx. peace.

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THE COLLAB WAS BETTER THEN I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE HOT DROP BOTH

It was straight, both could use some work. I think some multies and maybe a little more vocab would ahev made this real Ill. Nice drop though. Ayo, return the fav. and check this out for me hommies. Its one of my flows.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94673

6.5-7/10
good drop hommie

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Deva you came with nice structure, but structure don't mean shit in audio, I can happily say I appreciate the new style I write in, because even liens do get too repetitive unless you use multis and inner, i didn't see any of them, but the meaning was good,

gene.. Your flow was very nice, i was feeling your lines, vocab let this down quite alot, i mean the rhymes were a bit basic, with no multis but the depth was def there. .Pz