u spit first
no min/max linez

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Sorry about the set-up dawg. Lol.

Welcome to the fourteen ways to beat a fourteen year old seminar/
#1, tell him that the dinasours live IN the labrea pit and watch him suffocate in the tar/

Got his fisher price rhymes stuck in his Holster, can't bolster the strength to play cowboys and indians today/
But my gat travels free so there was nothing stopping me from pulling the trigger and putting him away/

I go for the kill when I smell blood and right now you're whetting my appetite/
you wandered away from the playground and now there are no parents in sight, time for my special: Holster delight

Beat you senseless until you're within an inch of your life and you repent this/
I'm like the U.S government in even though you are defenseless, an artillery barage comences/

Kids will be kids but this kid exploring his sexuality is absurd/
I flip a phallical bird to salute that the last time you saw pussy, it purred/

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

this guys rymes are non creative and dull like the colour grey...
rehersin his shit like they do in professional plays...

god dam, maybe u should join grease or footloose...
ya rymes are worse then a kids book, written by dr.seuse...

just by postin wit this herb, i see why meters his name...
scared of mc's, so wen he spits he stays meters away...

i just murdered rb's worstest...ma flow stayin hot like coffee in a thermos...

fuk speechless i leave this guy wordless... cuz the only way this clown is makin a livin is by joinin the shrine circus...

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

finally Holsters found his way
wasnt convincing but he did win
Breakdown-
flow=Holster
structure=none
punches=holster
sustainment=none
metas=Holster
vote-Holster
keep ya structure compact to both n ya'll elevate pz

MAKE SURA YA HIT THIS W/ AN HONEST VOTE PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94945

i agree..^
Holster pulled this off with better punches, and floh.............
other guy needs elevation.........

Vote: H

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2034#post942034
drop a poll vote

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Also, if you're going to say 'you need to elevate'
it would be very helpful if you explained *how*

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

good battle somewhat...holster took this just slightly but good verses from both Hol just hit a little harder and better structure Vote holster

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The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
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Alright, no offense to Holster but i have to say something. I don't know how everyone is voting for him when his rhymes don't make any sense.

First of all, Footloose is not a play. It's a movie with Kevin Bacon.

Second of all, if i rhymed as well as Dr. Seuss wrote childrens books i would have never lost. Dr. Seuss is the most popular children's book writer of all time.

Third of all, saying meters away from the opponent doesn't make sense since the meter is not a very large unit of measurement. That would be like standing a few feet away.

Fourth of all, worstest is not a word. You can't make up words to rhyme with other words and think your shit is ill. It's not a word. It doesn't rhyme with other words because it's not a word to begin with.

Last of all, none of his set-up lines have anything to do with his punches. They have nothing to do with anything.

Don't want to come off like a hater, I just don't like when people don't notice these inconsistencies and then leave votes without any good support at all.

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

ewww...horrible...horrible battle yo....

Meters needs a lot of work...and since he posted first I can only assume that's the best he can do at this point....it was decent but...I have a hard time even saying that ur verse was decent...ur punchlines made sense but that's only because they were so simple....and your rhymescheme was just as weak....but ur rhymescheme was better than HOLSTERS.....


Holster....ur verse looked like something that a really really really good emcee would write......after popping extacy, overdosing on acid, and finding their self in a rush on a bad day with severe writers block...in other words ur verse was horrible....lmao ok maybe that's a little harsh...I'm just fuckin with u..ur verse was bad tho...ur rhymescheme was simple as hell n so were ur punches...and you had the advantage of posting second so u knew what u had to beat...but then again maybe u thought it was just enough to win...

but in my eyes Meters took this...not by a mile....not even by a Meter...but he took it regardless...

vote- Meters

(btw don't take my vote to heart...just elevate...earn respect...blah blah blah all tha normal shit)

peace

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Breakdown-
flow=Holster
structure=none
punches=holster
sustainment=none
metas=Holster
vote-Holster

^^^^ I gatta agree with this right here.

Can you return the favor by voting on my battles. There in my sig, thanks alot hommies.

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder