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12-04-03, 01:36 AM
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De M-O-D Bruk
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For Ma Gurl
IP: FDD6 AE15
Baby You Just Mean So Much
My Heart Races Everytime Ya Go To Touch I Realize I'm Lucky To Be Together With You Don't Change A Single Thing You Do Who Woulda Ever Thought We Would Ended Up Together Kept Callin You Bitch Than Things Got Better I Realized I Was Only Seeing You On The Surface I Wasn't Livin Life With A True Purpose The More We Spent Time With Each Other The More My Heart Continued To Flutter You Have Accepted Me When I Didn't Deserve I Made A Crucial Mistake Which Struck A Nerve You Stuck Around Cause You Saw Something Special You Took That Mountain All To Casual Baby You Just Mean So Much My Heart Races Everytime Ya Go To Touch I Realize I'm Lucky To Be Together With You Don't Change A Single Thing You Do Thankful For The Decision From Your Viewpoint I Always Think Twice So I Don't Disappoint What I Feel For You Can't Be Mentioned In Words We Can't Slip Or Fall, We Movin Upwards We Proved We Can Overcome Difficult Times We Talk Things Through Our Thoughts Aren't Sublime This Feeling Isn't Foreign, I Been Here Before Took Me Two Years To Open A Real Door Now I Am Yours Forever Till You Stray Baby I Love You I Am Here To Stay Baby You Just Mean So Much My Heart Races Everytime Ya Go To Touch I Realize I'm Lucky To Be Together With You Don't Change A Single Thing You Do 3 links: Maven:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95979 Mindless:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96343 BadAndy:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96347
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It's Gunna Be Some Stuff You Gon' See, That's Gunna Make It Hard To Smile In Da Future...
-Pac Shakur Acro Nim The Initial,Period I Speak Out Battles Pink Slips 007 Pt. 2 Fuck Bruklor aka Self.
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12-04-03, 02:06 AM
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IP: C782 C9D6
/\ nice very meaningfull makes me think of my ex
you should work on your flow a little more seems kinda choppy vocab wasn't deep but wasnt elementary either overal cool drop make sure to drop a responce on my open mic ima be dropping one in about 10 minutes |
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12-04-03, 04:09 PM
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De M-O-D Bruk
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IP: 3B20 6C52
uppin
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It's Gunna Be Some Stuff You Gon' See, That's Gunna Make It Hard To Smile In Da Future...
-Pac Shakur Acro Nim The Initial,Period I Speak Out Battles Pink Slips 007 Pt. 2 Fuck Bruklor aka Self.
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12-04-03, 04:15 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 9DAE 3ADA
I liked this...but not as an Open Mic.
Not hating...but it seemed like this had more of a poetic sense to it. Know what I mean? There wasn't a flow like there is to a song. It seemed like you had to literally state each sentence for it to sound right. As for the meaning and depth, this was excellent. Just not in the right forum  Good shit though. |
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12-04-03, 04:27 PM
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New to RB
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IP: C5A9 E26F
this was a tight piece it made think of alot of thing in the past
on the return tip up on my thread lyricallycrazy03- lil freestyle
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12-04-03, 07:03 PM
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De M-O-D Bruk
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IP: FDD6 AE15
yeah lethargic I hear ya...
whatever I write I just post...so if it get's moved than that's cool too uppin.
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It's Gunna Be Some Stuff You Gon' See, That's Gunna Make It Hard To Smile In Da Future...
-Pac Shakur Acro Nim The Initial,Period I Speak Out Battles Pink Slips 007 Pt. 2 Fuck Bruklor aka Self.
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