10 lines

blind spit 30 min

check in..1

Touch a Star? Rush your bar Above I, Asterisk
You own a Lose.. but some how managed it
Vanish quick, Then Repeat the Same Rhyme Twice
Just Remember This L Tossed Came From Trife
A-Like, Right? Cloned My DNA Still Cant Write Gems
Your Mic's Left With More FeedBack The Mike's Flesh
Nice Text? Cut Your Text Short Like a Slight Breath
Your Repears here, Let's See iF you Can Fight Death
Quote Shit, And Leave Mods Asking For A CallaB
Trife Stabs Text And Leave X Froze Like Ice Packs


Ease!

sry didnt see this ma verse will b ready in a couple, i was waitn for a check in but i guess u decided to just post ill have mine up soon.......1

Yall shud kno by now, that im so sick even aids donations go to my address
u posted 1st the way u say X's verse was below average
ur battles aint savage plus the fact that ur shit is plain dont mean it'll fly
its a simillie the way i never liked ur ass so ill be damn if u make me die
i'll fry this bitch..my text is blunt i expected this vet to front
but G'll open his chest like old Pirates in a Treasure Hunt

the only reason i searched ya battles was to see how hard... NOT to try
your ahead of me the way u embeded biggie's cd..cause u ready to die
like i washed jeans over n over, after this battle ull be faded
stick to the basics, leave em gone in 30 seconds like TWO nicolas cages

people lets get votes common..............

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ite,

opener=tie
closer=x(week)
flow=tie
punches=x
personals=x
enjoyment=x

x=not a bad spit man seen u hit harder but gd,

mentil=work on personals and punches.

hit this with an honest vote plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8309#post998309 .....thx...............................pz

Opening: X
Punches:x
Personals: x
Wordplay: x
Vocab:x
Flow:x
Structure: MI
Closing: X
Overall: X

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lets go more votes please..................1

yo wut the fuk!
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y rnt we gettin ne votes..........lets go...........1

X Please return da favor on my 2 Battles..The links are in da sig or u look in elevated~ .

opener - both wack
closer - X
punches - X kinda played though
personals - blah
wordplay - X
overal - X


weak battle this should be in regular herbish ass frontlines

^ Whut he said

Punches: X..PLAYED TO THE MAX
Personal: None
Wordplay: X
Flow: X
Verdict: X

Front lines Hoe.

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overall - arrite battle. mentill came pretty good, verse flowed well and had metties which was nice to read, although he lacked strong punches which would have made the verse even better. x ecution had the punches, average hittin` punches, pretty good from him also. since you both focused on different aspect of verses, it made this vote difficult. x ecutions aspect, punches, are always needed in a battle verse, but as mentill illness had some also, it almost evened out. x ecution didnt have the metties, but mentill didnt have the punches. this is a tough decision because of that, but vote. . .x ecution. nice verses.


vote - x ecution



and THAT^. . children, is how you are supposed to vote.