Hey ya'll, im new to this whole thing but here is something I made up in college the other day. I'm not too sure what to do with the 'reply to 3 open mic threads' thing, can sumbody give us a little help on that...but here we go...

As I walk down the street I get the erge to break free
Lose my mind in public just for people to see
Inside outside what's it'a mean to me
Cant you see im a freak, give me the door to this key
What you get is what you dont and you cant coz you wont
But in the end it all comes down to that someone in front
From three to eighty, to one hundred and nine till you lose count
You see...you never listend to me and now look at the state your in
Dont say I never tried, girl you used to be slim
Deep down in the fats of this world you live by yourself
But on the inner side you fear that you'll lose all your wealth
Who looks down in growth, slouch around and eat toast
I'm sorry and all but that's me for tonights host.

From the depths of this world people move in and out
Time runs short for most but theres no need to shout
For about twenty years I have sat back and cried
Due to child buse, drugs and god knows what else
But thats not the point coz in me you see life and it's way
And come the end of the day that politics should have no delay
Lack of punishment must come to a certain pay so people can believe
That half this world lives its most but the coast of the host
Must co-inloax to become what it crosts in the departure of one's soul, to become...

Give your honest opinion as I am only just getting started. Thanx people!