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Old 12-12-03, 06:32 PM   #1
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SS Verse: Historical Moment

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Look Down At Your Wrist, Your Watch Is Spinning Backwards
Grey Hair Turns To Color, And In Reverse Fly Black Birds
Reappearing Buffalo Heards, Back In The Land Before Time
Life Goes From Old To Young, Like You're Holding Down Rewind
The World Was Refined, No Pollution Was Yet Known
The Air And Water Were Clean, With No Holes In The O-Zone
And Everything Was Home Grown, When People Had Morals
And Kids Werent Getting Shot, Over Silly Turf Quarrels
Listen To The Chorals, They Sung Because They Believed
They Never Questioned Faith, It Was All They Could Conceive
And They Didnt Grieve, Never Was A Tear Wiped On A Sleeve
They Percieved Death As A Step, To No Longer Being Niave
Then On A Midsummer's Eve, Somebody Questioned Perfection
Gathered A Collection, And Then Promised Them Protection
All They Had To Do, Was Follow A Few Guide Lines For Life
Promised Bliss After Death, But He Had Lied To Minds Alike
So They Took A Hike, Over A Desert For Three-Hundered Years
Never Questioned His Ambition, Never Did They Shed A Tear
They Never Felt Alone Or Fear, Only Felt A Great Hope
Even When Life Was Rolling, It Had Been Perched Atop A Slope
Started To Slip Away Like Soap, Drowning Like A Sinking Boat
Untill The Day, They Had Been Givin What They Asked For
They Rushed Into A Belief, When It Really Was A Masked Door
They Stepped Through The Opening, Expecting To Find Bliss
Wandering For 300 Years, Made People Forget They Exist
And Now They Arent Missed, A New World Has Unfolded
While There Was No God Present, The World Had Been Molded
Nobody Was Scolded, The Earth Took A Leap And Passed Peace
Cause Now Instead Of Fair Justice, You Get Beat By Police
Violence Increased, People Only Cared For Themselves
The Only Place The Bible Is Worth Anything Now, Is On Bookstore Shelfs

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Old 12-13-03, 03:59 AM   #2
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I checked this out and voted on it... I was really feeling this hommie. You used your vocab, and your topic very well. The flow was consistant, and rhyme scheme was good. This was a nice drop, hope you win the battle in the SS league...

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Old 12-13-03, 06:05 AM   #3
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this was dope man...what more can i say everythin was good in it you didnt really lack anything..im sure ulll beat ur opponent with this unless its superman LOL

Pz man and keep up the good work


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Old 12-13-03, 07:53 AM   #4
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This was very good, indepth, the flow was onpoint throughtout, maybe a few more multis, but the meaning behing this was fantastic, i hope you do win the SS battle, Pz
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Old 12-13-03, 10:29 AM   #5
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thought the concept was good and no complaints in its execution.....damn tight verse...good luck with it......pZ......
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Old 12-13-03, 11:51 AM   #6
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just a question... where in the hell was you when you wrote this??? a time machine? dunno... but yo fa ish was real ... i liked this read ... like you got ya future on ya heart... nice spit dunny

keep goin ya thang... never stop elevating...

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Old 12-15-03, 02:51 PM   #7
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Old 12-17-03, 12:45 PM   #8
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Old 12-17-03, 01:04 PM   #9
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Pretty cool. What's with people dissing religion. Are all of you athiests? I think it's a good topic though.
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