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CLIFFJUMPER
My perception blurs, my clouded eyes see decepticons stealing energon+
Orders are stay at bay, but my focus is relentless on killing Megatron+
Deez decepticons been stabbing me in my back since dawn of cybertron+
So I gonna discharge two shots to Megatron’s jaw as I draw my firearm+

Rumble
My weapons disengage the earth as I divorce the grounds layers+
I continue to impact my foes til their face resembles a round crater+
Summoned by Soundwave, I bounce the heads of dem autobots+
But somehow Star Scream seems to aways fuck up all my plots+


Bumblee
Since Cybertron, I've turned lights out on foes like I broke a switch+
I speak through my gun, so some say that I only spoke through clips+
Decepticons claim I don’t hold the weight because Im a buck_0_9+
I’ll leave them with ‘no foundation’, like I ‘deducted their spine’+

Grimlock
Cursed at birth, dam Optimus Prime to hell, I wanna be autobot leader+
I'm doomed to follow the command, my soul is incernerating like ether+
------....Aiight, U got the leader position for now Prime....--------------
My sword will rip Sound Wave’s neck ta give his vocals a breather+
While Constructicons keep drowning my mind, like im soaked in fever+

Optimus Prime
Grimlock, like studying maps U better keep quiet and know your place+
U autobot disgrace..My fist will elevate ur jaw..leave teeth displaced+
......................Back to da subject at hand....................
I a fearless leader, devoted speaker that rids the world of +
It seems I’m quoted eager, I’ve devoted to free the world of evil +

Megatron
Its like Im 'distributing fatality cards' the way I'm 'dealing out death'+
I’m serving Bumble bee his last meal as my bazooka enters his chest+
Shut up Star Scream! Another word and I’ll rip ur thorax outta socket+
Ya got a gun? Better Cock it!! Better yet its best ya launch out a rocket+

Star Scream
I always get bossed around like I’m the lowest member of the 4 horsemen+
If Megatron gets in my face again, I’m gonna dish out a shot to floor him+
Me and Thunder cracker rule the air waves like digital AC tweeters+
Nonbelievers..I’ll decease Megatron like Critical patient receivers+

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Mystic (Traitor)

Now Lets Get Serious No One Wants To Read A Long Ass Verse About Transformers

But I Guess You Stayed On Topic And Ya Flow Wuznt Too Bad
But You Get About A 7/10 Becuz I Didnt Really See Anything Special Or Any Vocab But Thats All I Gotta Say

Iight Piece I Guess, But It Didnt Have Much Vocabulary...Grab A Dictionary and Thesaurus Dogg...It Helps Elevate Your Rhymes Alot..Flow was Koo and it Stayed On Topic Well so I'll give you a

7.5

-Uno

This was alright i thought....structure in this was good.....the concept of this was good too i thought, didnt see anyone do a piece on transformers before...but i liked the read....i thought your vocab was fine...you had some good multies.....flow was good...keep at it.

uppin for any last minute feedback

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B.E.S.T

The Comeback


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Mystic (Traitor)